Perhaps no century in the human-being history witnessed more advance in technology than contemporary century did. Due to changes in people's lifestyle, it has been argued that people have allocated more time for their pleasure activities compared to the past. While I do not tend to refute such a view, I believe with tremendous changes in technological devices, people's leisure time has declined recently.
Thanks to modern technology, people spend less amount of time on compulsory stuffs. At first glance, it seems that this fact should cause people to divert their attention to leisure facilities. However, non-compulsory activities have played significant roles in everyone's life. Since current labor-market has been sought for well-profession job seekers, there is a growing appetite among applicants for following education to higher level. Not surprisingly, people participate more on job-training courses or educational institutions instead on enjoyment-doing things. Furthermore, online courses or televised opportunities for higher education have paved the ways for people to be involved in different forms of acquiring qualifications.
Another justification for people's involvement to compulsory activities is the ubiquity of modern technology such as internet-access laptops or well-equipped cell phones. Conspicuously, by increasing amount of technological advices people are more accessible for responding to their superiors even in their vacations. Compared to previous decades, not only does it cause most people to have longer work hours but also it means that they are under tremendous pressure to do what they are supposed to do instead of pleasure tasks.
On the other hands, the impacts of current facilities for having facetious lifestyle should not be overlooked. Modernisation, as an inevitable trend of today's environments, allows people to have plenty of time for their pleasures. First, rapid transportation systems, for example, cut down the amount of time for traveling especially for those daily-commuters. Furthermore, online shopping or business transactions via internet help people to save their time. As result, individuals can pursue their own interests by careful time-management.
To recapitulate, people's time-scheduling on different tasks have been considered. As it was mentioned, the amount of time for pleasure has been decreased as people are more available or having tendency for improving their education. However, their time managing can extend their enjoyment's activities.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.279805352798 0.229887763892 122% => OK
Verbs: 0.177615571776 0.158761421928 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0997566909976 0.0866891130778 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0510948905109 0.046263068375 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0462287104623 0.0685040099705 67% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131386861314 0.118717715034 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0729927007299 0.0351676179071 208% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.37221032833 2.67179642975 126% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0413625304136 0.0309702414327 134% => OK
Particles: 0.00243309002433 0.00188951952338 129% => OK
Determiners: 0.036496350365 0.0887237588012 41% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00973236009732 0.0209618222197 46% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00243309002433 0.0139019557991 18% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2530.0 2387.08602151 106% => OK
No of words: 369.0 408.028673835 90% => OK
Chars per words: 6.85636856369 5.86048508987 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.471544715447 0.338922669872 139% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.363143631436 0.251872472559 144% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.279132791328 0.174417080927 160% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.214092140921 0.112833075102 190% => Too many words length more than 8 chars.
Word Length SD: 3.37221032833 2.67179642975 126% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579945799458 0.524397521467 111% => OK
Word variations: 67.0386155037 59.2087087015 113% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.45 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2020717639 48.84282405 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 120.699889404 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.45 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.65 0.644075263715 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 54.7643631436 45.7405998639 120% => OK
Elegance: 1.7610619469 1.45489161554 121% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198360906929 0.300154397459 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0675712673854 0.103427244359 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0456765604011 0.0752933317313 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.478431940163 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122304029941 0.151897553556 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671595749331 0.114077575197 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571239182087 0.0781384742642 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.316112379638 0.336927656856 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0579452052002 0.067059652881 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117040776943 0.210909579961 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396007339603 0.0618886996521 64% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
More about sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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