Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I do not agree with the statement that because modern life is complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability of plan and organize.
To begin with, because life is changing everyday, it makes no sense for people to draft plans. When the whole thing changes, people have to change their plans to accommodate to the new scenario, thus, planning and organizing beforehand will be meaningless. Take me as an example. In 2020, I planned to study abroad to the U.S. as an exchange student, and I also got the visa and booked the plane ticket. However, when the coronavirus broke out, the U.S. government forbid people who lived in China to land in the country. Quickly, as the Covid-19 spreaded all around the world, universities were closed and students had to study and take courses online. Although I made a comprehensive plan of my exchange experience, I could not predict the outbreak of coronavirus.
In addition, rather than deliberately planning the life, enjoying the accidance in the life can bring people more happiness. As the line in the Forrest Gump going that "Life is like a box of chocolates, you never know what the next one will taste", the most interesting part of life is its great unkown, and life itself is like an adventure. If one person keeps making plans and tries to keep his or her life totally on the track that was previously organized, it will be very boring. For instance, my friend Anna is a traveller, but she never makes plan before trips. Although for many times, she has to sleep in her camps in the wild, she gets a lot of fun from the starlight and from blowing up the bonfire. She always said to me that life is short, and carpe diem.
But I have to say that the ability to plan and organize is very precious, and can help people to success. Imagine that you are a student who will take exam a month later, if you can plan and organize the process of preparing for the exam properly, you will be more likely to be well-prepared and eventually get higher grades in the exam.
In a nutshell, although making plans can help people be more successful, it also darkens the life and is meaningless in many scenarios.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...To begin with, because life is changing everyday, it makes no sense for people to draft ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, well, as to, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61439588689 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5949549283 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53470437018 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.51792114695 313% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9270748469 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.588235294 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8823529412 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285477021878 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970973943527 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130570376844 0.0737576698707 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212451551784 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181436564782 0.0645574589148 281% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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