When it comes to the topic whether artists should be supported by government or support themselves, different people hold different views. Some think artists are supposed to invest in themselves, claiming that they are responsible for dealing with personal issues. However, from my point of view, the government should support arts.
On one hand, art is essential to modern life and central to civilized society. To be specific, people nowadays is more willing to pursue beautiful items than people in the past because they find those beauties could contribute to a relaxing, comfortable life. And art is the key to those beauties. For example, Apple's products are well-known not only for their technology but also for their wonderful design. They provide users a feeling of luxury, ingenious, thus leading to a satisfaction of arts. If without art in designs, Apple may not succeed and we cannot enjoy the arts in technology. On the contrary, if the government gives its investment in arts, citizens have more access to getting a better understanding of arts.
On the other hand, works of art convey the ineffable. To illustrate, there are various ways to convey ideas like writing, speaking. But when foreigners get together, they can hardly have a fluent talk, so arts come into the picture. For instance, the Starry Night, one of the masterpieces of Vincent's, promises a certain method to get into Vincent's deep heart. Without any words, we could feel the mania from the bottom of his heart, which cannot be expressed in words. If the government allocate some money to build art museum and works of art, people would have positive outlets for their negatives.
Admittedly, this should never be an excuse for artists to get sloth. It is undoubtedly worthwhile for artists to promote themselves then catching proper opportunities to lead a better life and create more valuable works.
In a nutshell, due to the great value of arts, the government is supposed to invest in arts. Besides, artists are also required to calm down and create great works.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...om the bottom of his heart, which cannot be expressed in words. If the government...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05278592375 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68480478699 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574780058651 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9005372451 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.15 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.05 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228930194021 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654072527721 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110171695896 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155293124556 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160270164406 0.0645574589148 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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