From my perspective , people should live in big cities because of three main reasons. Firstly , people can get a job faster than live in small cities. To explain , the big cities have economic developments because many things in these places are modern and civilized such as transportation or shopping mall center. Moreover , many companies are most established in big cities. Some people was looking for their jobs almost a year in small cities , but when they moved on in big cities they can find their jobs easier. Secondly , big cities have greater educational institutes than small cities that is the main reason of some students in small cities to move on. To illustrate , big cities can seek knowledge easier because they have many ways that are advantageous for learning. For example , large cities have modern libraries to search for knowledge and to review lessons. Finally , living in great cities can be easy to find all things that people want. When they need something they can buy now because big cities have many department stores. These places sell many things. Furthermore , The malls update new fashionable things such as cloths , computers and shoes etc. Therefore , people should live in big cities because of three main reasons mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 1977.66487455 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 207.0 407.700716846 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06280193237 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52015912559 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 212.727598566 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 618.680645161 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2499108228 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6153846154 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112400253148 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529050970429 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373774403855 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112400253148 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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