some colleg prefer open class for their students between semester other prefer no

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some colleg prefer open class for their students between semester other prefer no

University are an important station in our life. It offers a different program for students between two semesters. Some of this program offered classes away from student speciality. Others motivate their student to participate in work project. Personally, I belive that Universities should introduce work project for their students during their vacation time. I think that way for two important reasone which i will explore in the following essay.
To commenec with, Students will get ride off fear from speaking and interacting with other peolpe. This will help them tremendously during discuusion of their final graduation project in front of foriegn instructors. I remeber when i was in college, they oppen classes for a highschool student in order to learn english. All of us were excited to do that project in order to get training in comunication with other people. Furthermore, we get used with the questions and answers interaction during discussions. This project helps us tremendously when we get to the final year. We started to discuss our graduation project with instructors with much more confident. As you can see, this program build a confident among students, and helps them in their graduation requirments.

Secondly, Student can save money from such programs. some fee were applied for the high school students attending this program, this fees can be paid for college students who are teaching in this program which will helps them to pay their bill or rent. For instance, My daughter she enrolled in one of teaching program during summer time, she collect money around five thosands dollars. She was so excited and she told me she is ready to pay her rent and part of her tuition. Iwas excited too because I will not work extra time to offer more money for her. This experience taught me that. If university like to help their students, they can offer such like this programs in which student can get money and help their family too.

In conclusion, though some college prefer adding courses between semesters away from student major, I prefer for university to open classes for school students during that time not only because student college will get experience in open discusion but also they can get money which will help thme in their college expenses.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05026455026 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59363573658 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502645502646 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.9117981179 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7727272727 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302994183265 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821369411455 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103897191237 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228944648549 0.150856017488 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151398687023 0.0645574589148 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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