No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of saving our memorizes with photos or notes and post them on internet websites. If I were forced to choose, I would defiantly select keep my own experiments on public. It is my firm believe it will give me a benefits in future for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, keeping your personal experiments every day specially in your field work can attract more specialist to obtain new knowledge from your experience. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. before five years, when I started my work as a civil engineer on multi projects site, I forced a lot of new cases in my field, so I started to record these new cases by taking pictures and write some notes on the picture, then I started to post my work on many websites for workers in my field and I made a lot of discussion about this work, If it right or I can make any change. As a result, I got a new information from the specialist in my field, Also the junior engineers took new knowledge and have shown new work. Meanwhile, I made many new friends in my field from different countries just from posting these photos. If I had the opportunity to post these cases on other websites, I would have give a chance for more people to learn new things.
Secondly, posting you memories on social-networking sites can give you faith and passion to complete anything you have start to do. Drawing from my own experience. Before one year, I posted on Facebook that I have started my studying in master's degree, so now days I felt discouragement because of stress and work conditions, but when I saw this picture with a pretty text written by my. Consequently, I got a new motivation to continue my journey with this long trip of study and complete my passion to get this certificate.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that saving our memories can make a lot of things easy than before by review them in future. This is because can helps in got new information and make new friends in your field, and can gives the chance and motivation to finish your work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 274, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a benefit' or simply 'benefits'?
Suggestion: a benefit; benefits
.... It is my firm believe it will give me a benefits in future for a number of reasons, and ...
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Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Before
...fluenced by my own personal experience. before five years, when I started my work as a...
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Line 3, column 620, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rights'?
Suggestion: rights
...ot of discussion about this work, If it right or I can make any change. As a result, ...
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Line 3, column 977, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ses on other websites, I would have give a chance for more people to learn new th...
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Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... things easy than before by review them in future. This is because can helps in got new i...
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Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...iew them in future. This is because can helps in got new information and make new fri...
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Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...make new friends in your field, and can gives the chance and motivation to finish you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51371571072 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68093138913 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488778054863 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.7804551054 48.9658058833 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7333333333 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0780142585727 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323685966757 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386958438781 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0455743650083 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238191111971 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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