Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful What is your opinion Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Essay topics:

Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Human are the most complex living being in the planet. They perform far more complex task than any other animal. They use technology to reduce the complexity of these tasks. Computer is one such technology that has made our lives easier while providing sources to get entertainment. Therefore I do not agree that computers have made life more complex and stressful. I feel this for three reasons.

To begin with, computer is one of the best education tool available today. From school children to scientist it has helped to improve their knowledge. For example, when I was at the university, I had to do assignments and for those I have to do extra reading. Since the library only has limited number of books, everyone cannot refer the books recommended for those assignments. But in the internet we can find those books free and easily and we can use computer to read those. That's how computers made my life made easier at the university. Moreover, there are computer software that can be used by teachers to teach lessons more attractively and interactively. These tools has made both learning and teaching, a pleasant experience. As you can see, all these possible, owing to the computer.

Secondly, computers has made business world more efficient. With the globalization, stock markets have become very complex systems and billions of transactions happen in one second. Obviously no human can handle that amount of transactions and calculations. But with the help of computers, now businessmen do not need to worry about it. Furthermore, business analysis tools and prediction tools provided by computers has made easier to take critical business decisions more accurately. That's how computers has transformed business world to less complex one.
Last but not least, computer is a good entertainment tool. People can use it to listen to music, watch movies, draw a painting and many other entertainment activities. Therefore, we can use it to reduce our stress due to complex life we spend. For instance, recent research results show that people who use computer to listen music has scored more in an exam than people who doesn't. This provides us proves that, computers can actually helpful in handling stressful situations in day to day life.

In sum, computer can be considered as the best tool that human invented up to date. Its multi-tasking capability has helped people in many ways. It has made both learning and teaching easier. It has helped to the development of business world. Most importantly, it is a great entertainment to which help to deal with stress . That’s why I believe computer has made our life easier.

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Average: 8.2 (6 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i feel, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2183.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06496519722 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82678983834 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5313225058 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 686.7 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.063508047 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.21875 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.46875 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30842802814 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790672000693 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816041138905 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187373026976 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482437285169 0.0645574589148 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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