Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Most people agree that modern technology affects society in different ways. In my opinion, access to the Internet is enormously beneficial to both individuals and the communities as a whole. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, Online investigation and news reporting help to expose political corruption and keep politicians honest. In the past, there are a few news outlets, which often had deep connections with politicians. As a result, the reporters are extremely hesitant to talk against them. These days, however, The unprecedented advent of the internet exposes the real faces of politicians whether they are evils or heroes. Now, there are several realistic news channels and independent investigative sites available on the internet to expose political misbehavior.
For example, an online magazine reveals a story that our mayor had taken a bribe from a property developer. The case was reported by all online news channels and the investigation team and was flourished so quickly that the mayor had no choice but to resign. The report was so detailed and well researched including pictures and video clips for the same. This example demonstrates how the internet helps to strengthen democracy in the modern world.
Secondly, people can join hands for help through social media. In countries all over the globe, people use social networking services to share their ideas and options for help. While people in the past thought that they were alone and will not get a helping hand from others. My own country had the experience to demonstrate this concept. In 2018, our country faced a massive flood. Initially, the government of our country thought that we will never overcome the situation and the government purposefully sent requests to the developed countries for help through social media. All the countries unanimously helped to reform our country to the present condition. Each state received a huge amount of money, food, clothes, and medicines from all over the world. It is through the social networking platform all the care and support reached our country. Thus, as through the depicted example, it is clear that the internet provides people with valuable benefits.
Finally, the Internet is the ocean of knowledge and opportunities. We can derive not only answers for all our doubts through the sites on the internet but a lot of job opportunities through this. As a dentist, for example, when I reach the USA, the internet provides me information regarding my opportunities in this field. I cleared my national board exam and got a job in a nearby clinic through the platform of the internet.
In sum, the internet has implications in any field around our life. Browsing through the internet may surge in the following years, which leads to an 'Internet-Era'. We couldn't find any individual without using the internet in consecutive years. I strongly believe that the internet is a boon to our life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ars, which leads to an Internet-Era. We couldnt find any individual without using the i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, i feel, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2501.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 489.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1145194274 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81794100047 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529652351738 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 768.6 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3144624025 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3666666667 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166004527572 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043657760096 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426776063153 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827129187759 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02424513266 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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