TPO-23
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this busy life, everyone wants to quick and efficient, as a result, they are moving and working fast and tenaciously to achieve their goal. However, the question remains, is it better to work quickly and making mistakes or to work slowly and make sure that what they are doing is correct. Some people may think that working faster is much better because that is the world needed now. On the contrary, I believe functioning slowly and appropriately is more needed as of three rationales that I can explain in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, if the work has fewer mistakes, it doesn't need any additional work from their employees. On the other hand, if it is done quickly with lot of faults, it needs additional correction and overtime by the workers. For instance, my brother works for the missile construction firm in the USA. They fabricate and export missiles to various countries like Iraq and China. During the time of a war with Turkey, Iraq needed more missiles and they sent e-mails to my brother's company to make and sent more missiles in a particular time period. Therefore, the company insisted all the employees to work swiftly and escalate their production. Unfortunately, this leads to more mistakes, and Iraq rejected the missiles due to malfunctioning. The company suggested their crew members fix the mistakes by working overnight. My brother along with other co-workers, worked one whole week in the firm to correct them. This example clearly illustrates the hard work of employees to eliminate the problem caused due to speed works.
Next, a perfect product or work is much acceptable to all. If the product is worse, it will reduce the competency of the company with other competitors. In the case of the missile company, they lost a lot of plausible customers due to the ineffectiveness of the product with Iraq. They compared the effects and canceled their agreement with the firm which leads to an immense loss of income and some job opportunities. On top of that, In the stock market, they lost much of their shares and that eventually leads to the closing of some of the main branches in other states of the USA. Hence, a small mistake caused due to quick work leads to indelible damage to the company.
Finally, everyone is aware of the statement that- slow and steady wins the race. Working slowly by correcting all mistakes can achieve a great reputation and heights to the product. If the missile company compelled their crew to work slowly by correcting all the potential mistakes, they will not face such a crisis towards the end of delivering their product.
In sum, I strongly believe working slowly and making sure to correct all mistakes is much better than working quickly and making lot of mistakes. Additional work by employees and losing the competency of the product are some of the main problems associated with working rapidly with mistakes.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ith, if the work has fewer mistakes, it doesnt need any additional work from their emp...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 532, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...that eventually leads to the closing of some of the main branches in other states of the US...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 309, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tial mistakes, they will not face such a crisis towards the end of delivering the...
^^
Line 9, column 221, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...osing the competency of the product are some of the main problems associated with working r...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2416.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 493.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90060851927 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66006070646 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452332657201 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 743.4 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.905051284 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.64 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.72 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28083172653 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893856207492 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862183476137 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192584075126 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859575693591 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ith, if the work has fewer mistakes, it doesnt need any additional work from their emp...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 532, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...that eventually leads to the closing of some of the main branches in other states of the US...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 309, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tial mistakes, they will not face such a crisis towards the end of delivering the...
^^
Line 9, column 221, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...osing the competency of the product are some of the main problems associated with working r...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2416.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 493.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90060851927 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66006070646 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452332657201 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 743.4 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.905051284 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.64 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.72 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28083172653 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893856207492 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862183476137 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192584075126 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859575693591 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.