Some people suggest it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street while others thinks it is the right thing to do .I refute the idea of giving money to the beggars on the street because of the following reasons.
Firstly, Some parts of the world, we see children begging in the streets . I recently came across a story in the Indian news paper.There were some goons kidnapped school age children and broke their hands or legs to make them look merciful. They asked the to beg on the streets and at the end of the day goons collect the money from the children. This is the most worst thing that can happen to the child. We should not encourage children to beg and if people come across a child begging, people should take the responsibility to inform the police who can take necessary action of identifying the child background and send to children orphanage if the child does not have any family support.
Secondly, this can be dangerous to the lives of people and beggars as well. Some times in the dark streets if beggars are begging for money there may be chance that vehicles can go over them .We see people begging in extremely cold and hot conditions which can be extremely dangerous to their health.Instead of begging on the streets if the people do not have the capability to earn their own bread and butter people should look for government welfare organizations.Some times there is a possibility that dangerous people can be in the disguise of beggar in the isolated areas and they can threaten the people for more money with the tools like gun and knife.
Because of the reasons mentioned above people should think twice before offering money to the beggars as it can averse the situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64169381107 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49325916996 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498371335505 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 156.494073567 48.9658058833 320% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.333333333 100.406767564 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1111111111 20.6045352989 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 11.8709677419 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347277328108 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149360930185 0.076458572812 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187614366253 0.0737576698707 254% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273030630602 0.150856017488 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.223266623372 0.0645574589148 346% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 11.7677419355 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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