Drinking alcohol is detrimental and destructive for the health of a person at any age, especially for children whose body is not formed completely. Therefore, I strongly disagree with the statement that there should be no minimum age for drinking alcohol and will support my opinion with the following reasons.
First, age threshold is important for maintaining the order in the streets. The legislative prohibition of drinking alcohol for children primarily helps parents to control them as well as preserve youngsters from being drunk. For example, when I was thirteen all my peers we afraid to taste alcoholic drinks because the police monitored this severely. Moreover, it would be a shame for a family to know that its kid was noticed drunk. Therefore, the law about minimum drinking age is helpful both for police and children's parents.
The next argument deals with the harm that alcohol may cause to the undeveloped organs of teenager's body. Until the maturity, human organs are still in the process of formation and any poison can impair their functioning. Moreover, drinking alcohol in the early age may become the reason for serious diseases in the future. To illustrate this, one can refer to the data that shows that the people that are used to drinking alcohol from the early age are more inclined to have cardiovascular diseases and rarely succeed in their careers. Consequently, the consumption of alcohol is disastrous for the teenagers' bodies.
The last proof is about the negative impact of alcoholic additives on children's psychology and possible addictions that may generate from this. When a child starts drinking alcohol, he or she is more likely to become addicted than a grown-up. Additionally, this child becomes emotionally unstable and may even commit a crime. The TV show named 'My dear, we are killing our children' can give a lot of examples for this because in almost every filmed family there was a kid whose parents taught him drinking from the early age. As a result, in most cases, this child was easily irritated and eager to run against the law.
For these reasons, there should be a minimum age threshold for drinking alcohol. Otherwise, the absence of such threshold may lead to disorders in the streets, deformation of the bodies of drinking children and negative shifts in their psychology.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: I_AFRAID[2]
Message: You miss the verb here. You should rather write: 'we're afraid'.
Suggestion: we're afraid
...ample, when I was thirteen all my peers we afraid to taste alcoholic drinks because the p...
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Line 7, column 599, Rule ID: EAGER_TO[1]
Message: With 'eager to', use the base form of the verb: 'run'.
Suggestion: run
...child was easily irritated and eager to run against the law. For these reasons, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for example, as a result, as well as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06994818653 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7022762083 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533678756477 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4401681774 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3157894737 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346652377594 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116064700585 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981668181184 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217447898871 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795370333178 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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