Everyone requires physical activities to be healthy. I agree with this statement that the question suggested. I think the sports and social activities get bigger and bigger in society. Sport activities can encourage the students to be more active. As much as they have money, more people can use the center for sports and social activities.
People group who do the sport as a job gets bigger. It means that sport is a business in society now. People who do the physical activity need to be able to earn money from this. The government must support the athletes at least until they make result.
The physical activities that the students do such as running, playing can make them decrease their stress. Students are tired on their studying by struggling whole day. The exercise can be great solution for them.
After they use the money for their education, they can have rest of them. They can improve or fix their exercise equipment. As much as their center gets bigger, more people can use it like community center.
Investing on sport and social activities has more positive effect. I think giving the money on the physical and social activities is benefit to both local and college
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...ople can use it like community center. Investing on sport and social activities...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, at least, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 52.1666666667 35% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 1977.66487455 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 204.0 407.700716846 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87254901961 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41050899878 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 212.727598566 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53431372549 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 618.680645161 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.819743337 48.9658058833 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.4705882353 100.406767564 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0 20.6045352989 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.76470588235 5.45110844103 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127061478225 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510713921182 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407445411684 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818757967517 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563439087855 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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