Telling the truth is the keyword for any relationship successful in my opinion. Relation that depends on lie will never go through for too long in any of life fields. That is my point of view for many reason that I had passed in my life for many reasons.
Relationship is not only between man and a woman, or friends that will be in any aspect of our life. For example; buying anything like a house, car, or even phone all has to be built on truth not hiding any information or misleading the person. Which that happened in my life, I was going to buy a car and the salesman never mentioned some hiding fees that surprised me after I got the estimate which was big different from what he told me that make me never thinking in going back to buy anything from him which now he lost me as a costumer.
Truth is the best way to keep a relationship last longer. Furthermore; lying will terminate any friendship over time. For example, I have best friend every time I call her recently to ask about her after two minutes from talking she will tell me that she is getting another call and she has to go, at the beginning I was believing her because I trust her, but when she started to do that every time I call I realized its just a lie and she lost me as friend, if she told the truth I will be appreciated for her more than a lie.
In conclusion, people who do not considered the truth in all aspect of their life from work, friend, or any corner of their life will have hole that they will fall in it one day and no one can help them, trust in my opinion is the powerful key for any relationship success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...fe fields. That is my point of view for many reason that I had passed in my life for many r...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
...way to keep a relationship last longer. Furthermore; lying will terminate any friendship ov...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...l and she has to go, at the beginning I was believing her because I trust her, but when she s...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'holed'.
..., or any corner of their life will have hole that they will fall in it one day and n...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...erful key for any relationship success.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.18971061093 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35477809796 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520900321543 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.444836725 48.9658058833 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.3 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1 20.6045352989 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0892502427312 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541579427701 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040895199746 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0608726327574 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151761131842 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.39 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.61 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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