TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Today telling true is known as an ethical base in relationship between people. Being honest plays a major role in strengthening and making close relation although I totally disagree with the statement. Sometimes it is necessary to tell a white lie to keep your friend or your wife or motivate someone. I will try below to explain my view.
To begin with, keeping an old friendship is so complicated and associated with lots of external factors which are not under your control. It is vital to tell a friend a white lie to keep the friendship or a marital relation. For instance if a husband has betrayed his wife and now he is not doing such mistakes, he would tell a lie about his commence and keep his marriage. All in all keeping a relation is much important than being frank.
Secondly, some of my people are easily get upset and may halt their relation only base on what you have told them which they don't like. Telling true to this friends would dramatically break the friendship and cause conflicts. To illustrate this, assume a friend who has recently bought a T-shirt and asks me about that. I can keep him/her happy by telling her good response not based on my opinion. relations would be kept by not telling true and also your friends would stay happier.
Moreover, achiveing a goal need immense effort and hard working. Individuals need to be motivated by friends and parent. Telling small lies to increase motivation and make someone move is a modern technique used by teachers in schools. In elementary schools consider a teacher facing a child who has not make good mark on exams. The teacher by telling him/her that he/she did well enough keeps the student moved and the student will get a better mark on the next exams.
In sum, a liar is against the human kind is stereotype, and I don't believe in that. Keeping relations, moving children are much important than not telling a lie although every ones should always be honest and never betray friendship or marriage.

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Average: 6.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...m which they dont like. Telling true to this friends would dramatically break the fr...
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Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Relations
... good response not based on my opinion. relations would be kept by not telling true and a...
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Line 4, column 180, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'moves'.
Suggestion: moves
...to increase motivation and make someone move is a modern technique used by teachers ...
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Line 4, column 304, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
...er a teacher facing a child who has not make good mark on exams. The teacher by tell...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, in my view, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68571428571 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52465394679 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568571428571 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6909773485 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119778012345 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358685395342 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358729218603 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730760046048 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477001179572 0.0645574589148 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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