Mensure a friendship or compare one to other is a very unfair task. A friendship is a complex and unique relationship between two or more people and one can not be replaced by another. To decided what is more important an old friend or a new one, is for me, an impossible question to answer. Both and every friendship is important and in the following paragraphs I will explain why.
First of all, I will start talking about old friends and why they are so important to keep them. When you have an old friend, it means that a relationship with that other person have survived time and all kind of challenge in life like distant, marriage, different path in life, that usually separate friends. Also means that person knows you and your history and can understand you and comprehend you more than any other. I can bring to this essay a personal example: one of my best friends live on the other side of world and we still in contact as well as the did the first day we met at the elementary school when we were only 8 years old. Our friendship still as strong as used to be in those days.
On the other hand, a new friendship can open a new universe of knowledge and experiences that we did not had before. A fresh point of view, a complement, an open door to a new culture or idiocincracy can be very welcome by the hand of a new friendship. How can you will not going to consider this friendships an important one? To illustrate this concept I would bring up my own experience again where I could find help and comfort in a new land thank you to new friendships. Immigration could had been even harder than it already was if not were for the good new friends I found in my first month of arrival. Today, they are like my new adoptive family.
In conclusion, it is not more important to keep old friends or otherwise, because what it is important is to keep our friends, old and new. Friendship itself is a blessing that we do not have the luxury of dismiss any of them. Friendship must be consider a gift in every circunstance and for that we must take special care of all our and uniques friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, still, well, in conclusion, kind of, talking about, as well as, first of all, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35696202532 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57320321383 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496202531646 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2717787437 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6111111111 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9444444444 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21916320858 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723697352907 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636253610892 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139841431723 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256570668651 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 10.9000537634 73% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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