I think , keeping old friends is mre important than taking new friends. Old friend are more stable and you are able to recognise their behaviour. In fact, keeping old friend take you more opportunity to attract new friends.
First of all, the old friends are more reliable because you are familar with their condition. As amatter of fact, the more reliability is the more people can trust on each other. For ecample, most of successful companies or social groups like Apple and Micrsoft are based on two or more person that had old relation and friendship with each other. In addition, old frinds showes predictable actions so that you can define the future decision with more accuracy.
the second reason for remaining friend with old one is time consumpion. Due to the fact that you do not need extra time to be familiar with different behaviour of your friend you are able to handle difficulties in your friendship better than before.
Also, old friends have more knowledge about you so you are able to trust on them and cooperate with them in your problems. For instance, having money problem, on is able to take guide and help from his old friends rather than new fiend that does know you as well.
The last reason that taking old friend in near is attracting new friends. In fact, taking old friends away will make you so many problems in facing with new ones. For example, if one of your classmates see your behaviour in front of the other people and understant that these people are really your old friend, he or she will forget you as friends. On the other hand, your relatinship with old friends demonstrates your future behaviour. In fact, lack of old friends not only mis interpret your face in front of new studensts but also will prevent you to comunicate with new student in your job or the college.
In conclusion, Old friends can accompany you in difficult conditions because they are familiar with your behaviour. Altough your decisions can be effective if you cooperate with more friends, the old one are more capable to recognise the true decision according to your ability. Also people that have more ld friend are able to comunicate with new friends as well. The more old friend you have the higher you are able to comunicate with the new conditions sothat you can attract more new friend.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'first of all', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208616780045 0.229887763892 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.142857142857 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.151927437642 0.0866891130778 175% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0566893424036 0.046263068375 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0884353741497 0.0685040099705 129% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.142857142857 0.118717715034 120% => OK
Participles: 0.0249433106576 0.0351676179071 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.41812344052 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0272108843537 0.0309702414327 88% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0408163265306 0.0887237588012 46% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0181405895692 0.0209618222197 87% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00680272108844 0.0139019557991 49% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2322.0 2387.08602151 97% => OK
No of words: 406.0 408.028673835 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71921182266 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.307881773399 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.216748768473 0.251872472559 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.155172413793 0.174417080927 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110837438424 0.112833075102 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41812344052 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.423645320197 0.524397521467 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.9412072109 59.2087087015 76% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0848755915 48.84282405 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.1 120.699889404 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.644075263715 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 41.9748768473 45.7405998639 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.30708661417 1.45489161554 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385921602439 0.300154397459 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.157055794511 0.103427244359 152% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0835299898411 0.0752933317313 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.606092323389 0.497263757937 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.115258170019 0.151897553556 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173585438788 0.114077575197 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565179912162 0.0781384742642 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.299736656937 0.336927656856 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0798164785269 0.067059652881 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269630425343 0.210909579961 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044967476735 0.0618886996521 73% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8870967742 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 19.0 8.42114695341 226% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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