TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Means of transportation is very important part of our lives. It is use by all people in the world as a way to go to their work, school, or go to places where they want to be. There is no shortage of debate whether in twenty years there will be fewer car in use than there are today. In my view, fewer cars will be on the road on the next twenty years for two main reasons which I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, today people are vastly interested in the green environment, thus, pushing certain advocacies to lessen the use of cars which can threaten the environment by emitting harmful toxic in the air. As of today, people are making a move for a much greener environment, hence, the use of car pooling is of them. In my city, Manila, majority of people are sharing the use of their car with friends or officemates to lessen carbon foot print. In addition, people are avid fan of it because at the same time they can save money on weekly gasoline bills. I think in the near future, it will lessen the cars use in our city and hopefully our cities in the Philippines will follow this move toward the green environment.
Secondly, in my hometown Manila many means of public transportation is currently being constructed which means many options of public commute will be used by the people, hence, less private cars will be used in roads. Moreover, President Duterte adminstration has a project which is called Build, Build Build are constructing more trains which is LRT, MRT and also closed a bid with Japan to help build subway in the Philippines which is a means of faster commute for the Filipino citizen. People will opt to use public transport instead of their cars because it will took less time to travel because it is a much more efficient way due to advance technology in mass transport. As we all know, traffic congestion here in the Philippines are the worst in the world. It will take you 3 hrs just to go to work when using your private car. On the other hand, when you are taking the MRT or LRT it will just take 30 mins maximum.
To summarize, I believe people will less use their car as means of transport. This is because people are wanting ways to help lessen the use carbon footprint in the environment by using car pooling instead of their own car, also, there are many mode of public transportation which is very reliable and faster way of commute.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun means seems to be countable; consider using: 'many means'.
Suggestion: many means
...ent. Secondly, in my hometown Manila many means of public transportation is currently b...
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Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Build
...on has a project which is called Build, Build Build are constructing more trains which is L...
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Line 5, column 569, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
...t instead of their cars because it will took less time to travel because it is a muc...
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Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ns of transport. This is because people are wanting ways to help lessen the use carbon foot...
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Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun mode seems to be countable; consider using: 'many modes'.
Suggestion: many modes
...stead of their own car, also, there are many mode of public transportation which is very ...
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Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'modes'?
Suggestion: modes
... of their own car, also, there are many mode of public transportation which is very ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, i think, in addition, first of all, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1962.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46924829157 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48102998337 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466970387244 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3643163875 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.411764706 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8235294118 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235940932201 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925990138377 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846134973065 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16479033942 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729315163451 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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