nowadays human is so busy, thus he always trends to facilitate and create a comfortable circumstances his daily life, in my opinion it is obvious that our life today is easier than it was a few decades ago, and i will explain my point of view in the following essay.
first of all, technology is in hectic development and so has a direct impact on our life, for exemple today it is so easy to communicate thanks to phones and internet which minimise distances, you can talk and see your interlocutor just by hitting a bouton instead waiting days and days to get a letter in mailbox, another figure is chores and how it is easy today with this plethora of innovations washing machines, vacuims, dishwasher, etc...
in constructions field it is possible now to build a higher building due to sophisticated engines(excavater, dump trucks,...),hence employees are not asked today to do a hard work and suffer from exhausted job, instead having just a good training and the right knowledge to guide those huge tools.
secondly, and it is the most important in my opinion, medical field is way better than yesterday, every day scientists discover a new remedies and new outils for diagnostics, today's simple disease was a killer disease, and as a compelling exemple i have a uncle who past away a ten years ago , he was suffering from a primitive cancer of prostate, i think if my uncle has this illness today maybe he has a chance to survive due to a new technologie in medicine and a spesefic and development care that they procure now in hospitals.
in conclusion, i strongly believe that today is way better than our grandparents days, due to the big development technology in different field specialty in medicine field.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80201342282 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9908418283 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607382550336 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.1344086022 293% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.142402022 48.9658058833 264% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 286.2 100.406767564 285% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.6 20.6045352989 289% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.4 5.45110844103 374% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138657013491 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071926849811 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341202998404 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071926849811 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341202998404 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.0 11.7677419355 263% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.05 58.1214874552 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 10.1575268817 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.45 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.01818996416 129% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 10.002688172 290% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.0537634409 255% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.247311828 254% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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