Nowadays the world is going in fast peace thus, we need our things Done as fast as we can, that’s why there is a hectic rate between companies to invente a new appliance that’s gathering effecacity and rapidity in same time. This development bring more advantages in my opinion and I will explain my opinion in the following essay.
First of all, our daily activities changed with time, I remember when I was kid my grandmother spent hours making food, and days for cleaning the house, now thanks to those machines, I clean the house in just minutes. As a result I have more time and energie to spend with my family.
Secondly, the working women needs help completing her chores because after a long day in work she can’t sets and cleans the clothes manually, that’s Why washing machines are invented for. And it’s one example of others. And as a compelling example recently I bought a swinger for my three months baby and I really can’t describe how such a simple invention imade my live easier.
To sum up, machines bring a lot advantages with, especially to working mom’s helping theme to get easier life and enjoy precious time with there families instead loosing time in completing chores.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to complete' or 'complete'.
Suggestion: to complete; complete
... Secondly, the working women needs help completing her chores because after a long day in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, second, secondly, thus, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65097851271 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67619047619 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.4944916882 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.625 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0926160314267 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409091764602 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465219107947 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0578560262427 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513921849329 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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