TPO-06 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, life gets easier and more comfortable than it was when my grandparents were children. In retrospect, it took a huge amount of time to go from one place to another. But, now we can reach in the whole world within hours with the help of technological machines. In communication, it took months to reply a letter in return as well as peasants life get easier. They can grow crops with effortless work and in less amount of time. Here, I will explain how the life gets easier, nowadays, with the help of technology with examples and supports.

Indeed, humans life get easier and simple nowadays. For example- people in retrospect, used bullock cart as transport vehicle. It takes hours and hours to go from one place to another. They did not have any option other than bullock kart. But now, train is the most important thing that people invented 200 years before. thousands of people can board in it and it can carry all of them from one place to another place within few hours. Apart from this, we use it as a major transportation vehicle in recent. Tons of tons raw material can be send from one place to another place within required time. So, nowadays it play a vital role for transportation.

Secondly, In retrospect, people used to send their message though letters. it took huge amount of time to reach at destination and in returning. But recently, we have internet era So, we can send a message within second around the globes. It takes only few second to reply any mail or messages. So, Human life gets easier and simpler in communication as well.

Furthermore, In past, peasants used to ploy their fields with hands and human made cultivator that runs with the help of bullocks. So, it also, took a huge amount of time to ploy one acre field. Recently, people can ploy several acre fields within hours with the help of electronic cultivator. It just runs with the help of tractors. Only, driver required to run the tractor. But nowadays, without pilot tractor are come in the market. It control with the help of remote and savant use different kind of program to run the tractors.

In inference, I would like to say that humans life gets easier than when our grandparents were children. We can do our stuffs within required period of time. It heralds a new results if we finish our task on time. I hope, this progress in technology would not stop in future.

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Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thousands
... that people invented 200 years before. thousands of people can board in it and it can ca...
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Line 3, column 617, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'plays'?
Suggestion: plays
...e within required time. So, nowadays it play a vital role for transportation. Se...
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Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...d to send their message though letters. it took huge amount of time to reach at de...
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Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun second seems to be countable; consider using: 'few seconds'.
Suggestion: few seconds
...second around the globes. It takes only few second to reply any mail or messages. So, Huma...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
... communication as well. Furthermore, In past, peasants used to ploy their fields wit...
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Line 7, column 440, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'controls'?
Suggestion: controls
...ilot tractor are come in the market. It control with the help of remote and savant use ...
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Line 9, column 40, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
... In inference, I would like to say that humans life gets easier than when our grandpar...
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Line 9, column 143, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...n. We can do our stuffs within required period of time. It heralds a new results if we finish ...
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Line 9, column 176, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'result'?
Suggestion: result
...quired period of time. It heralds a new results if we finish our task on time. I hope, ...
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Line 9, column 266, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...s progress in technology would not stop in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for example, kind of, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64539007092 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53619462899 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479905437352 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.755178025 48.9658058833 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.3870967742 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6451612903 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22580645161 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130331573432 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380356548092 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692547834491 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822706731496 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658209483822 0.0645574589148 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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