In the modern world everything become so easy to do, from washing the cloths to moving to the other planets. These all happens due to the industrial revolution and advancement in scientific technology. Now we are in modern era which brings all sort facilities, for example we can do the more complicated maths with in a seconds whereas in earlier time it takes more than hour to solve the problems. Some people think that because we are used to the works with modern technology, the usage of creativity is reduced much. But the fact is not like, our technology helps us to improve our creativity thoughts.
First of all, I want explore few real instants how it improves our creativity. For example, nowadays children using the video games to learn the maths and letters, my son uses the video games and my cell phone and teaches me that two times two is four. It indicate that he learned maths through mobile and further he asks me about creative questions regarding this subject, to be honest, for his certain logic question even I do not know answer. Another one time I made some kind pronunciation mistake then he corrected that mistake. Surprisingly, I asked him how do you learned that he replied that he learned from online computer games. So these are indicates how the modern technology improves our creativity day to day life.
Nevertheless, when we are addicted to some kind easier life then might use our brain less meaning, productivity of human goes down. True up to certain point but it does not mean that creativity become very less. For example, in each generation the creativity of human keep on going one step further than previous generation. For instant, the IQ level of the current generation always 120 on and average whereas 50 years before it was somewhere around 80, this one of main indicator for how creativity keep on growing. second example, forty years before, the children mile stone for walking and talking was two years but for that same activities it take hardly one year to one and half years. These are very example how the modern influence our creativity.
Finally, Even though there may be some sort drawback due to modern technology. Still, the benefits of it, overwhelmed the it's disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...letters, my son uses the video games and my cell phone and teaches me that two t...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'regarding', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'whereas', 'for example', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228773584906 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.146226415094 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0849056603774 0.0866891130778 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0589622641509 0.046263068375 127% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0825471698113 0.0685040099705 120% => OK
Prepositions: 0.106132075472 0.118717715034 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0259433962264 0.0351676179071 74% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61076562518 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0330188679245 0.0309702414327 107% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0872641509434 0.0887237588012 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00707547169811 0.0209618222197 34% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0165094339623 0.0139019557991 119% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2261.0 2387.08602151 95% => OK
No of words: 385.0 408.028673835 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87272727273 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.309090909091 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246753246753 0.251872472559 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166233766234 0.174417080927 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101298701299 0.112833075102 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61076562518 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.524397521467 109% => OK
Word variations: 66.2631972215 59.2087087015 112% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.2631578947 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9896739331 48.84282405 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 120.699889404 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2631578947 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.736842105263 0.644075263715 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.54480286738 198% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 44.9384825701 45.7405998639 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.25409836066 1.45489161554 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241918877163 0.300154397459 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.115910631331 0.103427244359 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.086860895656 0.0752933317313 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.469251389819 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.128988462572 0.151897553556 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878928797807 0.114077575197 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518680985417 0.0781384742642 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.247960542883 0.336927656856 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0619172286652 0.067059652881 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160062404849 0.210909579961 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570104823684 0.0618886996521 92% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.