I think internet give people many worthwhile information. I explain my opinion in following reasons.
First, In these days people do not read books and the lack of public knowledge resulting from not reading book can compensate with searching and using internet. When a person roams in websites in internet environment, he or she will face new information in different categories including art, politic, economy, geology, psychology and so on. Users tend to read blogs on internet instead of reading books because blogs are terse and pithy.
Second, this technology provides digital products like music and video to users that enhance the culture of a society in a higher level. As we know culture is an important factor in making people civilized and mature that helps people relate with each other in better ways. So cultural information that people get from internet is a noticeable type of information that we can not neglect.
Third, getting information from internet has some benefits in time and money. For example without internet, a person that wants to know how to cook must go to a book store and buy a book about that. It means in optimistic conditions he or she must spend at least one hour and cost for gas to be in book store and come back home. But with internet just it needs to google how to cook and clicking a website address to know about this issue.
In conclusion , our world has been titled universe of information as far as a person without internet knowledge is counted a unlettered one. Businesses are investing much more than any time on content producing base on this slogan that content is king. So internet with its information providing function is a valuable technology in harmony with our current situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much worthwhile information', 'a good deal of worthwhile information'.
Suggestion: much worthwhile information; a good deal of worthwhile information
I think internet give people many worthwhile information. I explain my opinion in following reas...
Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
...o know about this issue. In conclusion , our world has been titled universe of i...
Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
...n without internet knowledge is counted a unlettered one. Businesses are investin...
Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
... in harmony with our current situation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, third, while, as to, at least, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88215488215 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65689601548 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599326599327 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1356735463 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217094475442 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741158147714 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636553499386 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1203184778 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281218876791 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated.
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.