Travelling with tours as a group has been propagated in recent years and we can see most of people prefer to have trip in this type. However some people take their journey by themselves because many reasons which they can not find them in tour travelling. I agree with the statement which says travel in a group by a tour guide is the best way and I explain my view in following reasons :
First of all, being in a community for going to another places has many benefits for a person which we can not find them in individually trips. Surely the group travelling makes the costs cheaper for every one because all the expenses will be shared between number of people like transporting in city, hotel services, entertainments and the other services that could be used mutually so this makes people interested in having trip as a team to reduce total cost. furthermore there is famous quote which says people can know each other in travels and this is the other good effect of journey in a group. For example in visiting another country we meet various types of persons with different jobs or characters in our group that teaches us many valuable things.
Secondly, a tour leader that is familiar with the destination we want to visit helps us in introducing it's places and tourism centers which we will confused in absent of this person. Without knowledge of country we waste the time in searching and exploring and it may cause many problems and dangerous issues. So tour guidance is a professional job in all worldwide and tourists have accepted this as a useful and helpful position. For instance in visiting to a country particularly crowded places you should search in many websites to find a restaurant or club with spending much times however you can ask from a tour leader and easily go to a proper food provider place.
In conclusion there are many positive and negative comments about this subject but in overall evaluation you can conclude having a travel with a group and tour guide make your journey comfortable and cost effective with many unforgotten memories and scenes without any concerns and bad situations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...opagated in recent years and we can see most of people prefer to have trip in this type. Howev...
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Suggestion: tripped
...e can see most of people prefer to have trip in this type. However some people take ...
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Suggestion: However,
...eople prefer to have trip in this type. However some people take their journey by thems...
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Suggestion:
...I explain my view in following reasons : First of all, being in a community for g...
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Suggestion: Furthermore
...ng trip as a team to reduce total cost. furthermore there is famous quote which says people...
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Suggestion: furthermore,
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'confuse'
Suggestion: confuse
...laces and tourism centers which we will confused in absent of this person. Without knowl...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'travel'.
Suggestion: travel
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58086032734 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2242113236 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.272727273 100.406767564 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5454545455 20.6045352989 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9090909091 5.45110844103 218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201768059702 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797312298313 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537213027893 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14013520436 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074076034215 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 11.7677419355 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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