TPO 48- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Planning and organization has been extended in recent years because of difficulties existed in our modern life. Nowadays people do not look to the life very simple and easy and this makes them to paid more attention to programming and time management. So I agree with the statement that says because of complex life young persons should learn how to organize and I explain my opinion in following reasons:

First of all, technology is one of the main reasons of complexity of our societies and living is not as simple as our fathers had. Modern human should know how to use many devices and inventions in order to have a more comfortable life and this means people particularly young adults should go to many classes in order to learn these apparatus. For example people in past just have spoken to their native language and skilled with writing and reading but recently all people should know English language and working with computer while not being familiar with these educations means unlettered.

Secondly, there are many problems in current life which make our situations very tough and this is the other reason young people should learn how to plan. In our cities we have many challenges and managing the time and believing the schedules just could help us to confront these. For instance traffic is a famous unwanted phenomena in our urban environments and causes many delays in our activities and only the planning ability could solve this trouble.

Finally, in these days because of this puzzled pattern of our life people should sketch their path and look the future many years ago. Prediction and forecasting is a vital ability which have been promoted to our literature and all nations respected to these. We know that everyone should has a defined career and take step based on this scheme. For example a young boy should plan when he wants to go college or in which years of his life he would marry or look for a job.

In conclusion, in simple previous years our ancestors easily live together without any competition and lack of resources but harsh conditions of modern life provides a challenging atmosphere with requirements like planning and organization.

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Average: 8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93495934959 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56684061927 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533875338753 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4998881208 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.076923077 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3846153846 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 5.45110844103 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255726872448 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934724252207 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468947005237 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148900079013 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569540944467 0.0645574589148 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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