TPO16:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the contemporary era, specially after the end of world war II, we have observed that travel's rate have dramatically increased, all over the world. Now, the quality of every trip is the number one issue. One of the elements which can improve the quality of trips is the tour leader. It is relatively new job that has expanded all over the world, after increasing trips. Personally, I concur with the statement, and I strongly believe that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
First, the tour leaders are expert individuals in their job, so that they know exactly the local place that we travel to. I think if we want to completely enjoy our trip, and have the chance to visit the place with all its details, we should take a tour leader, and let them guide us. In this way, we shouldn't be worry about finding new places attractions. For instance, I remember one time me and some of my friend traveled to Paris. As we arrived to the city, we did not hire a tour guide, hence we just hanging around dazzlingly in the city for days. We just aware of the famous tower of Paris, but we had absolutely did not know anything about other tourist attraction of Paris. After a few days. we decided to hire a tour leader. Since we hired that guy, we just understood what a splendid city the Paris was. You see? You will never regret, if you ask someone's opinion, specially a skilled person.
Second, the tour guide individuals can be the contact bridge between you and local people. In other words, even if you do not understand the language of the place that you travel, you can still communicate with the local people thorough the tour leader. The tour guide can translate your words and convey it to the people, and you have the chance to understand them better. Besides, the tour guide can illustrate you the history of every place that you go, so that not only you get the chance to visit and enjoy your trip, but also have possibility to gain knowledge about the place during your trip. It can turn into a active learning course, right?
In general, I believe hire a tour leader would be really helpful, specially in the international trips. In this way, you do not miss even a single eyeful location in your trip, because the tour guides are totally know your destination. Moreover, you can contact with local people, even if you do not know vernacular and finally you have chance to learn more about that particular place.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, hence, if, moreover, really, second, so, still, for instance, i think, in general, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5191011236 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3641303868 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492134831461 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 633.6 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7949789693 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4347826087 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.347826087 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78260869565 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210220654058 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680711188649 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810060427447 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145820974755 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396430474927 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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