Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The world is in state of flux all time, and no wonder if we witness that the life quality has been change during the past decades. However, a controversial question is often raised regarding to this issue whether the life quality has been improved or not. Some people may hold the view that today's life is much more difficult than five or six decades ago. Conversely, I strongly believe that the life has become much better and easier than our grandparent's times. I have numerous reasons why I subscribe to this distinct attitude elaborating cogently in the subsequent paragraphs.
The first reason coming to mind consolidating my standpoint is the facilities that we use in our every day's life such as internet, laptops, cellphones or other household's gadgets. These tools deffinetly have shaped our life to a much better situation. We are so dependent to them that imagining a world without them would be impossible. For example, I can name internet and the great advantages of it for the human life in order to do so much works that make the life easier. We can now shopping without even a single move, thanks to the internet, or we can contact or friends or families whenever and wherever we want thorough the internet, or even accessing tones of information just by simple clicks.
Another reason which deserves some words here advocating my outlook is the noticeable amendments in the medical services and health care conditions. These monumental improvements causes a remarkable betterment in life expectancy all over the world. In other word, today every single new born infant hopes to live longer than previous generations who used to live in this planet. To be more specific, before the world war second, the average life expectancy was under 50 years age, but now in most of the countries this measure is above 70 years, which means that every single individual can hope to live more than 70 years
To put it briefly, I strongly concur with the main statement because of improvements in the medical and health care system, which have been greatly improved in comparison to the old time. Plus today we access so much facilities that make our life easier. In nutshell, in fact, there are multiplicity of other factors supplementing my aforementioned my statements, which can be alluded, but are not embraced due to the dearth of time. Finally I suggested a survey be conducted to find out whether these changes have had any contribution to achieving peace and serenity for majority of people or not.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is often raised regarding to this issue whether the life quality has been improv...
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Line 1, column 293, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...not. Some people may hold the view that todays life is much more difficult than five o...
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Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...it for the human life in order to do so much works that make the life easier. We can...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'shop'
Suggestion: shop
...s that make the life easier. We can now shopping without even a single move, thanks to t...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'cause'.
Suggestion: cause
...nditions. These monumental improvements causes a remarkable betterment in life expecta...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...o the old time. Plus today we access so much facilities that make our life easier. I...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...not embraced due to the dearth of time. Finally I suggested a survey be conducted to fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, conversely, finally, first, however, if, look, may, regarding, second, so, for example, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2095.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90632318501 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73493989542 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552693208431 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.7011127401 48.9658058833 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.235294118 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1176470588 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131926571809 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448533098509 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401066554725 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822312037719 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286930353334 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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