Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Altough communities are specially NGOs are spreading all over the world, most young
people do not engage in their activities. I believe some
youth are not incline to take a part in the communities. Some times it is not relevant to
their tendencies but they do not have enough time to allocate to such activities. Hence, I concur
with the statement, and I have numerous reasons why I subscribe to this attitude elaborating
cogently in the ensuing paragraphs.
The first reason coming to mind consolidating my standpoint is that vast majority
of young individuals get tangled with the hectic life. They spend most of their times in the
universities, schooles, or such educational environments. Therefore they do not have free time
in order to dedicate to communities. To be more specific, every educating young persons need to
concern about his or her coriculum, which some times can be really bussy and time consuming. I
mean every course has different professor, and every one of them expect you to do variety of
homework, assignments, or projects. In such a busy schedule you hardly can find room for
engaging in the communities.
In approaching this issue, apart from the point I have made above, there is also another
subtle reason which should be considered meticulously. Today, most of young people have a
part time job along side their school. They should work hard so that they could afford expenses
of collages, or even their lives. In such a tangled universe, I guess it is natural that youths
can not take a serious part in the communities. Take my own experience as an example. I used
study another city, expect my hometown, as a bachelor student. Since the university cut my
scholarship bacause of economic ardousness, I had to seek for a part time job so that I could
afford the school's expenses. In the new situiation, I had to reduce, or in some cases
completely cut off, my charity activities. Before that I used take a part in a NGO which provides
food for homeless people, and I had worked there for free. But after my scholarship removed, I
couldn't resume my activity and I left that NGO.
Another reason which deserves some words here advocating my view is that young people
need some leisure time for themselves to allocate it with their personal relationships such
as the plotanic friendships or their romance relationships. And with all these garbled and
frenzied situations that they tangled with, they probably can not find another extara time
to assiste in communities. After all, they have to keep their social relations so that they
wouldn't be secluded, and every single of these relationships need so much time. Thus, I guess
it is normal for them not to engage in the lots of communities.
Taking all given arguments into account leads us to the conclusion that It is routine
for young individuals not helping in the communities. They need to settle down their personal
affairs, professions, and also educations. In a nutshell, In fact there are multiplicity of
other factors supplementing the aforementioned claims, which could be alluded here, but are not
embraced due to the dearth of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, really, so, therefore, thus, after all, apart from, i guess, in fact, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2678.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 532.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03383458647 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87530829962 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483082706767 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 829.8 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 1.86738351254 643% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 16.0 4.94265232975 324% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0265772596 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1851851852 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7037037037 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14814814815 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 37.0 4.53405017921 816% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88709677419 307% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222851289761 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622875638281 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528229240439 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551851703687 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478426091408 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.