Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
Today students more interested in politic.
Politic has always been one of the most integral parts of human's life. If we take a
quick glance at the human history, we will comprehend that the most successful nations were
the ones which had a dynamic policies in face of issues. Plus, their citizenship always observed
their politicians precisely. Therefore, I completely concur with the primary statement, and
additionally, believe It is a crucial duty for students to watch out the governments and totally
aware of political matters. I have numerous reasons why I subscribe to this distinct attitude, and
I will elaborate them in the following paragraphs.
First, I think political decisions which have made by the politicians have strong
impact on everyday life, including student's life. Hence, it is necessary for them to follow it
closely. In some cases, Many students are unwilling to branch out into the new and curious areas,
such as politic, but they need to justify that this ignorance breed devastating consequences for
the future of country. In other words, expressing no tendency toward politic issues, may lead to
help corrupt politicians to expand all over the country. As a result, the future leader probably
would be the unreliable and ignoble characteristics. The long term outcome of political ignorance
may lead to establishing a dictatorship apparatus in the country, which destroy the democracy and
liberty. This view took its inspiration in some considerable part from Marxism theory. A novel
outlook in its own era which believed that political blindness will bring slavery for regular
individuals.
Moreover, students should carefully witness political matter because, I think following
the political debates especially among the university students have positive impact on their
educational situation. To be more specific, this hypothesis actually, has provoked critical
debates among sociologists, whether this particular opinion would be substantiate or not, it has
remaining disputable for several decades. However, recent scholars authenticate the assumption.
Initially this was deride as a far-fetched conjuncture, but gradually it has received grudging respect
and empirical support. New theories states that the students who are more engaging to the political
debates, achieve critical view which can help them in order to progress in other fields. Thus,
they can flourish and improve their scores by attending in political debates.
All in all, I completely concur to the primary statement, because I think political decisions
have largely influence on our life. Additionally students can improve their critical view, and
increase their overall scores by attending in political debates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, i think, such as, as a result, in other words, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2335.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68126520681 4.8611393121 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95330628021 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576642335766 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 728.1 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2550399139 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.19047619 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 29.0 4.53405017921 640% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100804138648 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0277372218307 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343415014796 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0273321572813 0.150856017488 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363221014113 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 10.9000537634 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.