Should a factory built in your community?
Although there is a long standing discussion among inhabitants, whether building a factory
should be built or not, I totally concur with establishing a new factory in my home town. Apart
from all the cons that a factory can bring to the city, it also breed so many pros that I am
going to elaborate some of them in the ensuing paragraphs.
One of the reasons that coming to mind at first is that building a factory would be really
helpful in order to solve, or at least abate dramatically, the unemployment crisis. To be more
specific, I need to point out the fact that, specially in the recenet years, we have been facing
a gradual increment in unemployment rate specifically among the youth. Hence, establishing a
new manufacture would be a great solution for people who has been seeking for job.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that a modern factory would be prosperous
for local economy. In other words, an active and qualified manufacture can helpful for domestic
economic growth. For instance, recently I have read a paper about the relationship between local
factories and their affect on expanding local economic and cultural aspects. In this regard, the
researchers have concluded that more dynamic production is the quintessential factor for towns, and
small cities to flourish their economic and cultural reputation all over the country.
Another equally important point in supporting my opinion is that a factory can produce
cheaper goods for native resident, because the all the materials and commodities manufactured in
the same city. Hence, they shouldn't pay extra charge for transportation of products. As a result,
not only the individuals who work for the company take advantage of existence of factory, but also all
the citizens can share in its benefit.
To put it briefly, I completely agree with establishing a new factory in my home town,
because I believe it can help to reduce the unemployment crisis. Additionally, it can develop and
spread local economy all over the country. Plus, entire city can purchase less expensive commodities
in their home town. In nutshell, in fact, there are multiplicity of other factors supplementing
the aforementioned reasons, which could be alluded here, but are not embraced due to the dearth of
time.
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...lly, the unemployment crisis. To be more specific, I need to point out the fact t...
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...n the recenet years, we have been facing a gradual increment in unemployment rate...
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...y among the youth. Hence, establishing a new manufacture would be a great solutio...
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...ied manufacture can helpful for domestic economic growth. For instance, recently ...
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...ut are not embraced due to the dearth of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, hence, if, really, so, at least, for instance, in fact, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19312169312 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91403767585 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568783068783 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5754868323 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.6875 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.53405017921 551% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11078694178 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353632937392 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579192187013 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0300072386411 0.150856017488 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524668601414 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.