Agree/Disagree Q.
If you do not make sure other people (especially influential people or your employers) know about
your strengths and accomplishments, you will never get successful in life.
It is obvious matter that every individual has variety of strengths and weaknesses
combining together as a single characteristic. In this regard, I believe it is significant to
take a quick glance at both sides of the statement, inorder to grasp a comperhensive understanding.
Some people hold this view and assume that exhibiting strenghths could be helpful. However, others
take the opposite side, and think an individual should be humble so that achieve fortune. I
personally concur with the late attitude, and I have numerous reasons why I subscribe this distinct
idea. I will elaborate them cogently in the ensuing paragraphs.
One of the reasons coming to mind at first is that a person needs to identify with
coleagues in the work places in order that establish a rapport with them. In other words,
I believe over-stressing in strenghts would be annoying for others. As result, they repudite you and
likely do not cooperate with the conspicuous guy. Consequently, you do not get enough chances to
prove yourself which lead to unpleasant outcomes. To be more specific, I can refer to one survey
that I have read recently. This particular survey was conducted to measure the collaboration spirit
among employees. The results authenticate that the more person boasts about his or her strenghths, the
less collaboration we witness in the office. Sociologists conclude that increment in showing off
strengths breed individualism which could be devastating for the companies.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that we see almost no successful person
forget his or her weakness. They usually not only try to conceal them, but also reveal their weakness
to the public. They consider it as a pride for themselves, because they could conquest their
weaknesses, and crave an outstanding niche among all other people. Take the Steve Jobs as an example.
He mentioned that he used to afraid of branching out to the new and curious areas, but he always
knew that it is not only necessary, but also crucial to invent new gadgets to improve the life
qualities. Hence, he defeat this weakness and thrive to achieve novel areas.
To put it briefly, I cast doubt in the primary statement, because I believe it is vital for
people to accept their weakness and try to conquest. additionally they need to identify with others,
if they want to increase the collaboration spirit in the work environment. In a nutshell, in fact,
there are multiplicity of other factors supplementing the aforementioned arguments, which could be
alluded, are not embraced due to the dearth of time.
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... boasts about his or her strenghths, the less collaboration we witness in the off...
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...eal them, but also reveal their weakness to the public. They consider it as a pri...
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...elves, because they could conquest their weaknesses, and crave an outstanding nic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, so, then, in fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2215.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18735362998 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97160812308 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569086651054 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6843404998 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3043478261 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5652173913 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08695652174 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 28.0 4.53405017921 618% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0932695245771 0.236089414692 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0250791434028 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324291786188 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0217827317108 0.150856017488 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033992444676 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.