To remain happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than achieving success.
Although it is crucial for everyone to reach their goal, I think remain happiness is much
more important. Some people probably do not concur with me, because they believe if you don't
obtain what you wish for, you couldn't be satisfy. However, as I said I believe only remaining
optimistic and glad would be enough to have a prosperous life. I have numerous reasons why I
subscribe to this distinct attitude, and I will elaborate them cogently in the ensuing paragraphs.
One of the reasons coming to my mind first is that as Aristotle mentions the ultimate
target of life is reaching happiness, not only temporary satisfactions, but also achieving constant
fortune is the main goal of life. In this regard, every individuals need to seek for happiness
in life. Try to be optimistic, and enjoy every single moment of life would be helpful in order to
achieve this particular goal. Hence, we should look at life as a temporary era to gain joyful and
happiness.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that some times we struggle assiduously
in order to achieve our dream, or ends, but we won't. We all probably have experienced these sort
of moments. Some people feel such a deep sorrow and sadness in these moments, however others
don't really care, because they only care about striving and hardworking. They are the optimistic
persons, who are always can be happy no matter what comes as a result. This spirit would help them
to survive from the unfortunate moments, because they understand life as a beautiful journey. In this
outlook, you enjoy every step of yours, and see it as a wonderful opportunity to gain happiness.
Whether you achieve your dream or not, you can be happy and thankful because of this splendid life.
To put it briefly, I concur with the primary statement, because I guess the ultimate goal of
life is reaching happiness, no matter what way you follow, it is crucial to remain glad. Additionally,
some times we don't achieve our targets, but we shouldn't be disappointed or become sorrowful, because
,as I have contended, we only need to enjoy the journey. In a nutshell, in fact, there are multiplicity
of other factors supplementing the aforementioned statements, which could be alluded, but are not
embraced due to the dearth of time.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98200514139 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73514360993 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53470437018 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9822125768 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.666666667 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6111111111 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.53405017921 529% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144938236395 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05022063924 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512592393084 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0406807791106 0.150856017488 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463342302109 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.