Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Although communities, specially NGOs, are spreading all over the world, most young people do not engage in their activities. I believe some youths are not incline to take a part in the communities. Some times it is not relevant to their tendencies but they do not have enough time to allocate to such activities. Hence, I concur with the statement, and I have numerous reasons why I subscribe to this attitude elaborating cogently in the ensuing paragraphs.
The first reason coming to mind consolidating my standpoint is that vast majority of young individuals get tangled with the hectic life. They spend most of their times in the universities, schools, or such educational environments. Therefore they do not have free time in order to dedicate to communities. To be more specific, every educating young persons need to concern about his or her curriculum, which some times can be really busy and time consuming. I mean every course has different professor, and every one of them expect you to do variety of homework, assignments, or projects. In such a busy schedule you hardly can find room for engaging in the communities.
In approaching this issue, apart from the point I have made above, there is also another subtle reason which should be considered meticulously. Today, most of young people have a part time job along side their school. They should work hard so that they could afford expenses of collages, or even their lives. In such a tangled universe, I guess it is natural that youths can not take a serious part in the communities. Take my own experience as an example. I used study another city, expect my hometown, as a bachelor student. Since the university cut my scholarship because of economic arduousness, I had to seek for a part time job so that I could afford the school's expenses. In the new situation, I had to reduce, or in some cases completely cut off, my charity activities. Before that I used take a part in a NGO which provides food for homeless people, and I had worked there for free. But after my scholarship removed, I couldn't resume my activity and I left that NGO.
Another reason which deserves some words here advocating my view is that young people need some leisure time for themselves to allocate it with their personal relationships such as the platonic friendships or their romance relationships. And with all these garbled and frenzied situations that they tangled with, they probably can not find another extra time
to assist in communities. After all, they have to keep their social relations so that they wouldn't be secluded, and every single of these relationships need so much time. Thus, I guess it is normal for them not to engage in the lots of communities.
Taking all given arguments into account leads us to the conclusion that It is routine for young individuals not helping in the communities. They need to settle down their personal affairs, professions, and also educations. In a nutshell, In fact there are multiplicity of other factors supplementing the aforementioned claims, which could be alluded here, but are not
embraced due to the dearth of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, really, so, therefore, thus, after all, apart from, i guess, i mean, in fact, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2616.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 531.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92655367232 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80035803286 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88382524079 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480225988701 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 825.3 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 1.86738351254 643% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7412501201 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8888888889 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88709677419 307% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225622916876 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635843755205 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552770863945 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121988532469 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698448916447 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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