Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

The lifestyle of the current generation is much different than this of our grandparents. personally, I believe that life today is easier and better. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.

First of all, the internet and smartphones make our everyday life very convenient. Nowadays, people can solve many problems only by using their smartphones. they can use a ton of applications in order to communicate with each other or to share information. Imagine, how difficult was for our grandparents to speak with their relatives who lived abroad. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. About sixty years ago, my grandmother moved to Australia in order to find a job. From that point, she had not spoken to her sister for 3 years as she could not find a way to communicate with her as her sister lived in a remote village where they did not have a postman.

Secondly, the number of war conflicts has significantly been reduced in the last century. this means that people can enjoy their life and they can make plans and dreams for the future. On the other hand, our grandfathers experienced the worst war conflict in human history as the death toll of the second world war was tremendous. Their only purpose was to stay alive and keep safe their families. For instance, my grandfather before the war wanted to become a doctor, but in 1942 he decided to go to the frontline of the war in order to save his country. this example shows that people had to give up their dreams in order to accomplish much more important goals as survival.

In conclusion, I am of the opinion that people today enjoy their life much more than our grandparents did. this is because people have the advantage of the internet and they have not taken part in any war. I hope all the next generations to have the same enjoyment in their life as we have today.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, as for, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75074183976 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64938804548 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543026706231 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.844551191 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2631578947 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7368421053 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36842105263 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114227305588 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399052999547 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418939581186 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801276355186 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290193568299 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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