In my perspective, the Internet has multiple benefits for human beings such as providing people with massive amounts of data and information. There are many online courses which help busy city dwellers to educate. Moreover, one can access to community's their admire through the Net. Last but not least, once not only gets the information but also they can merely obtain information, no matter where are they.
First, thanks to the Internet, learning is no more difficult. Many universities offer online programs which are not required to participate in classes regularly, and they can also get a degree at homes. Apart from busy folks, students who cannot afford to pay for a university now can pursue their fields of interests. Besides, the Internet enables people to learn when they prefer, so there is no obligation to start a class at 8 AM!
Second of all, many virtual communities have been made in the Net to assist members. For example, I am a developer, and it is common for me to run into problems. Fortunately, there many websites that computer programmers join together to answer each other's questions, and share information. I sign up the site called " stack overflow," and honestly, it has helped me resolve bugs in my codes. Plus, a wide range of reform groups has started to exist on the Internet which has significant influences on our daily life such as pushing governments to reduce the emission of greenhouse gases.
Ultimately, aside from abundant materials that the Internet provides, utilization of it is also convenient. For instance, imagine one is wondering where the capital of Iran is? Tehran or Mashhad? The hardest part of finding the answer is unlocking their smartphone, and open the google website. As he or she google their question, they will get the response straight away. Whereas, in the gloomy past days, human faced with many hardships to discover an answer. For example, once was required to refer a library, and appeal a librarian look up which book would reply to their question! It is undoubtedly unbearable!
For all the reasons that I have stated, I believe The Internet has furnished us with astonishing means to access knowledge. Online courses play an essential role in modern societies and are going to educate the majority of people. Moreover, using communities on the Net, one can contact with experts to resolve his or her problems, and all of this contribution requires no more effort than just a click!
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...up the site called ' stack overflow,' and honestly, it has helped me resolve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, honestly, if, look, moreover, second, so, well, whereas, apart from, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00242130751 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77155003607 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605326876513 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5121795244 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.380952381 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.19047619048 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130799348235 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333836366511 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380863702163 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759166126476 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395390313441 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 86.8835125448 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.