There is no shortage of debate over whether it is good to excell in one specific field or to have broad understanding of many different subjects. In this reapidly growing technological world, everyone are struggling to pace with rest of the world. I strongly believe that it is very important to know about many subjects rather than mastering one particular filed. I feel this way for several reasons which I explore in following essay.
First, learning and mastering one subject is not enough to implement anything in real life. For example, if you take computer science as a field, it has many core subjects like c programming, operating systems, unix, data structures. One cannot study operating system without strong basics of data structure and algorithms. Similarly, just knowing the algorithms doesn't help you to implement it in real life applications. All these are interdependent. In order to become a good programmer or software developer, broader knowledge of many core subjects is essential.
Second, knowing many subjects gives you an opportunity to have varied career. To illustrate, if you are a java programmer who knows Linux operating system, then you can work for application development as well as system development. An employee can work in a particular department for some duration and if he gets bored then he can change his team to work in a new technology. On the other hand, one excells in a particular subject and if market value of the technology goes down, then company will stop investing on the product. As a result it might remove all the empoloyees from that wing. If the situation outside the company is no different, then employee's career is at stake. He is forced to learn knew thing when he is not earning. That's why it is extremely important to know many subjects.
Third, knowing many subjects helps to solve the problem in real life. Even if you are an art student, you should have basic understanding of mathematics and science. Because they are essential in our day-to day activities from grocery shopping to yearly tax computation. Without knowledge of maths you can't survive in any part of world irrespective of your field of stude. Accordingly, I feel it's important to know more than one subject.
In summary, I strongly belive that it is essential to have broader understanding of many academic subjects. Because many subjects are independent and one can have better options in career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...field or to have broad understanding of many different subjects. In this reapidly growing tech...
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... Similarly, just knowing the algorithms doesnt help you to implement it in real life a...
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...any will stop investing on the product. As a result it might remove all the empolo...
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...earn knew thing when he is not earning. Thats why it is extremely important to know m...
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...derstanding of mathematics and science. Because they are essential in our day-to day ac...
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...utation. Without knowledge of maths you cant survive in any part of world irrespecti...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, if, second, similarly, so, then, third, well, for example, i feel, in summary, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2042.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02955665025 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90482966465 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1761650916 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.68 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.24 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252337087552 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680538670601 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601312766493 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156613113853 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481105974541 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.