Taking risks is an integral part of life, there is no person on this planet who has not taken risk in his entire life willingly or unenthusiastically. However, some people take risks willfully because of many reasons like they may want to do it as to grow in their career or they want to do something different. But is it worth taking risks to become successful or is it true that people get success when they try new things or they take risks? Well many people disagree with this notion that only people who are ready to take risks are more successful. On the other hand, I firmly believe in this theory due to following reasons.
To begin with, we all are aware that there are very less chances of a person to accomplish great heights in life if he/she is timid. As life is quite unpredictable and at some point of life one has to face difficulties, but if a person is not ready to take risks then he might just give up and he will never get success. I can able to recall an incidence of one of my friends, he was very apprehensive. He had taken commerce in class eleventh as he was fearful to take science. Though, he knew that he worked hard studying commerce, he end up giving up which resulted in failure. He could neither pass in that subject for two years nor could he learn to face the difficulties and overcome them boldly. Hence, I think it is extremely important to accept the challenges and face them audaciously.
Also, it is essential to have qualities such as courage, strength, fearless and willing to experiment new things to become successful in every field of life. If a person is brave and ready to try new things in life, she/he will learn many new skills which will always enhance the knowledge and eventually make a person stronger. To, recapitulate, I would suggests that it is necessary in modern world where there is so much competition to be able to take risks to become successful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun chances is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...h, we all are aware that there are very less chances of a person to accomplish great...
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Line 3, column 537, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'ends'.
Suggestion: ends
...at he worked hard studying commerce, he end up giving up which resulted in failure....
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Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'suggest'
Suggestion: suggest
...son stronger. To, recapitulate, I would suggests that it is necessary in modern world wh...
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Line 5, column 456, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'risks becoming'.
Suggestion: risks becoming
... so much competition to be able to take risks to become successful.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'as to', 'i think', 'such as', 'to begin with', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.174142480211 0.229887763892 76% => OK
Verbs: 0.189973614776 0.158761421928 120% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105540897098 0.0866891130778 122% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0633245382586 0.046263068375 137% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0791556728232 0.0685040099705 116% => OK
Prepositions: 0.100263852243 0.118717715034 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0184696569921 0.0351676179071 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61850046625 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0580474934037 0.0309702414327 187% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00791556728232 0.00188951952338 419% => OK
Determiners: 0.0501319261214 0.0887237588012 57% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.023746701847 0.0209618222197 113% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0158311345646 0.0139019557991 114% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1920.0 2387.08602151 80% => OK
No of words: 349.0 408.028673835 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50143266476 5.86048508987 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.272206303725 0.338922669872 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.171919770774 0.251872472559 68% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.134670487106 0.174417080927 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0888252148997 0.112833075102 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61850046625 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54441260745 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 59.2595480217 59.2087087015 100% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 23.2666666667 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3437720429 48.84282405 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 120.699889404 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.5376344086 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 40.458643744 45.7405998639 88% => OK
Elegance: 0.880952380952 1.45489161554 61% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271079132424 0.300154397459 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.141020547161 0.103427244359 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0704811887534 0.0752933317313 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.520161010314 0.497263757937 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118681064973 0.151897553556 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116321655803 0.114077575197 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698467181844 0.0781384742642 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.346751089659 0.336927656856 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0850193647999 0.067059652881 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215035638962 0.210909579961 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718056419068 0.0618886996521 116% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.