TPO 20 Task 2Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well.

At the dawn of civilization, it has become challenging to acquire a successful life. It does not only require careful planning and a high level of knowledge but also, needs venturing. Some argue that risk-taking people would achieve their goals easily in life. While others hold the different idea that it is always good to play carefully in life as people do not know about the future. From my perspective, the formal view carries more weight. I take the position on account for the following reasons.
Primarily, life is boring without taking risks because it is predicted and there is nothing new to experience. Accepting a new challenge and its consequences would make the people strong and tough in life. Even, people would learn something better if they failed by taking a new step in life. For example, Mark Zuckerberg had been dropped out of college. Even though he did not complete his graduation, he was never afraid of trying new things to establish his business. As a result, Facebook was created, and he became the most influential persons among the youngsters. Hence, one of the key ingredients of being a successful person is facing new challenges and trying out new things in life.
Furthermore, taking risk would allow finding new opportunities and new ideas which are necessary to develop a successful career. If people would not try new things, they do not know to be creative enough in life. Gradually, they will accept the situation and would not try to stretch themselves. Hence, even though they get the opportunity, they will afraid to accept it. To illustrate this more, one of my friends has been working in the marketing field since last five years. He was one of the brilliant employees in his company. He had never accepted his promotion because he was afraid to take the bigger position and did not want to face the new challenges, he might need to solve in the initial stage. Though he deserves a high promotion, he is working in the same position with the same salary till now. Thus, people might lose the foremost opportunities in order to stick with the safe position. Eventually, it will turn into the negative consequences, and people would start feeling to be neglected from the other people.
Having discussed the issue from this point of view, I rather look it from another point of view. Admittedly, it is easy to be productive for people who have been familiar with the rules and regulations for a long time. They save their precious time by avoiding problems in trying new challenges. Typically, this type of people is satisfied with what they have and do not want to explore new opportunities in life.
All in all, I strongly believe that a successful person is not afraid of taking a risk and trying out something new in life. This is because taking a risk can have positive outcomes and it helps to make life more interesting.

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Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, thus, while, for example, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2381.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7907444668 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66728111465 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503018108652 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 736.2 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3377856629 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.1034482759 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1379310345 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8275862069 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244317879015 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686311400908 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579693985799 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145549940393 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124290702174 0.0645574589148 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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