In today’s modern world time is money, it s extremely important to value time and to do things quickly. But is it correct to do things fast along with mistakes or is it fine to do things slowly but without making mistakes? There are many people who think it is essential to keep up pace with the peers otherwise one can easily loose. However, I believe that it is not completely true for the following reasons.
Firstly, in long run time is not the only deciding factor to prove the efficiency of a person, it is the result that matters the most in the last. Although, I concur that one should do work fast and not waste time unnecessarily because it is very important to finish work on time. On the other hand, if a person is only focusing on speed then there are chances that she/he might end up doing lot of mistakes and some of them could be unforgivable. In such a scenario, all the efforts and hard work will go in vain and one can lose for example one of my colleagues finished a given project in a short span of time but later it was noticed by the higher authorities that he did blunders in it and due to which company had to suffer a major loss. This event made him lose his job and taught everyone a lesson that it is mandatory to do things correctly and speedily.
Second, sometimes to do something big requires extra time; there are many examples of some of the great invention that had happened in many years. I can recall one of the great inventions that changed the face of entire world, I is the invention of the bulb by a famous scientist named Addison. He took many years to get success in making a bulb. He failed uncountable times but he did not quit and eventually he got success. Hence, it is necessary to comprehend that not everything can be done fast and if people try to do so then they might not get the desired result.
To recapitulate, I would like to mention that I agree with the following statement that to achieve goals in modern world is quite competitive and one has to be quick in doing things or else we will not get desired results. But it is also true that to get good results it is essential to concentrate on work and not commit mistakes because risking one’s diligence and efforts just for the sake of speed is not a wise decision.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 677, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'blunder'
Suggestion: blunder
...d by the higher authorities that he did blunders in it and due to which company had to s...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to do things correctly and speedily. Second, sometimes to do something big re...
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Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... extra time; there are many examples of some of the great invention that had happened in ma...
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Line 7, column 432, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e sake of speed is not a wise decision.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'as to', 'for example', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.184946236559 0.229887763892 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.187096774194 0.158761421928 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0903225806452 0.0866891130778 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0731182795699 0.046263068375 158% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0688172043011 0.0685040099705 100% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10752688172 0.118717715034 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0279569892473 0.0351676179071 79% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.48503653233 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0430107526882 0.0309702414327 139% => OK
Particles: 0.00430107526882 0.00188951952338 228% => OK
Determiners: 0.0666666666667 0.0887237588012 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0236559139785 0.0209618222197 113% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.010752688172 0.0139019557991 77% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2299.0 2387.08602151 96% => OK
No of words: 429.0 408.028673835 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35897435897 5.86048508987 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.265734265734 0.338922669872 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.188811188811 0.251872472559 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.132867132867 0.174417080927 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0909090909091 0.112833075102 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48503653233 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505827505828 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 56.8845430142 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 26.8125 20.5533526081 130% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.866871785 48.84282405 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.6875 120.699889404 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8125 20.5533526081 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8125 0.644075263715 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 45.6936188811 45.7405998639 100% => OK
Elegance: 0.97385620915 1.45489161554 67% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423916448847 0.300154397459 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.134736765053 0.103427244359 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0692682597109 0.0752933317313 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.53878261733 0.497263757937 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136385624213 0.151897553556 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179940038234 0.114077575197 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830387315166 0.0781384742642 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.426760815269 0.336927656856 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0507926452061 0.067059652881 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317201705937 0.210909579961 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778641284737 0.0618886996521 126% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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