You have lost an item of value on a train Write a letter to the railway company In your letter Describe the item Explain where and when you left it Say what action you would like the company to take

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You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter,
Describe the item
Explain where and when you left it
Say what action you would like the company to take.

Respect Manager,

Let me shoot a quick introduction of myself. I, Sharmistha Naskar, am residing from Kolkata. I am writing this letter in regards to lost item while travelling by train yesterday.
Let me give a brief about the lost item. Within a blue bag there was a type machine with a CASIO calculator. Both of these items have the stamp of our office logo. Although, chain was locked. But still, materials are quite costly and crucial. It was 2 days journey, I was in 2 tier AC coach, seat number S1 side lower section. However, ticket details are given below:
Name: Sharmistha Naskar
Age: 29 Years, female
DOJ: 10th Feb, 2020
I kept that bag just below my seat. By mistake, I left that bag while getting down from train at Bubaneswar.
I would like to request you to look into this matter and start processing as it is very much urgent for official use. Please let me know how do I collect the bag from my nearest convenient location. Hope you understand my situation.

Thanks in advance.

Thanks & Regards
Sharmistha

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...uction of myself. I, Sharmistha Naskar, am residing from Kolkata. I am writing thi...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... from Kolkata. I am writing this letter in regards to lost item while travelling by train yes...
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Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tems have the stamp of our office logo. Although, chain was locked. But still, materials...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73626373626 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4924982254 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.747252747253 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1251768863 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.875 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.375 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151199280566 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430021663356 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622781722321 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0576691845591 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504491137981 0.0580467560999 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.03 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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