You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company.
In your letter:
-Describe the item
-Explain where and when you left it
-Say what action you would like the company to take
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to request your courteous help with locating a lost item on today's 14:00 train from Brimingham to London.
The item in question happens to be a black medium-sized waterproof jacket. It is designed with a military-style camouflage-like dark gray patterns.
As far as I can remember, I only took my jacket off before the last time I responded to the call of nature, 15 minutes before arrival time. By the time I came back, the jacket had already been taken. Precisely, I recall leaving the jacket hanging on my seat -- the aisle seat number 11D.
I would very much appreciate if your diligent Lost & Found team can review their records and see if such an object has been received yet. Otherwise, it might be a good idea to review the security footage of the monitor with which my seat had a direct line of sight.
Looking forward to your gentle response.
Yours faithfully,
Assem Ashraf
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me I responded to the call of nature, 15 minutes before arrival time. By the time...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66457135607 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.716049382716 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1299140293 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 4.34317383033 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0896994321937 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322117585843 0.0766984524023 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385589729555 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0526438917184 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481521624901 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.