People always concern their career because it plays a crucial role in their life, especially their social status. Job security and job satisfaction are two important factors that influence people's decision whenever they are exposed to selecting a job. In my opinion, different conditions are influential in whether job security is more important than job satisfaction.
First, job security is a significantly more important factor in emergency conditions. Sometimes people are supposed to provide subsistence for a crowded family while they have no job and seek for one. Furthermore, in some conditions like a recession or an economic depression, people often have a serious problem with finding a job and maintain their family needs. Trivially, in such an unstable economic condition, job security is known by far the most important factor in job finding because the main issue is the survival of people. The great depression of U.S., for instance, represents such a condition in 1929 that people could not care about job satisfaction.
Second, job satisfaction is known as a vital factor in the happiness of people in a normal condition. According to a psychological scientific study conducted at the University of Chicago in the late of 20th century, the happiness of humans is closely tied with their feeling about the job they do. The findings indicate that people who are relaxed and experience related challenge in their job, enter into in a new mode in their life, known as optimal experience, which is the best feeling a human can experience. Therefore, this study comes this fact into the mind that we should explore a job which is consistent with our interests whenever we live in a stable economic condition.
In conclusion, unlike some people, who insist on choosing either job security or job satisfaction as a more important factor in finding a job, it is my deep conviction that the economic status of humans is mainly determined which of the job security or job satisfaction should be taken into consideration.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a new mode" with adverb for "new"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ated challenge in their job, enter into in a new mode in their life, known as optimal experie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13554216867 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9594243373 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512048192771 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.7642274218 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.153846154 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258810168251 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113179415512 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543644562081 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182876572552 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342208828536 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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