“The problems that exist in the world today cannot be solved by the level of thinking that created them” once said Einstein Alberts, reflecting us that the important of our level educations, without learning like who has wings, and no feet. The issue whether parents today are more involved in the children’s education than were the parent in the past or nor aroused much controversy among people with different ages, and different perspectives. Some contend think that the parents now are not involved in the children’s education due to fast accelerated modern society, therefore, they do not have much time to spend with their children. However, in my opinion, I completely agree that parents today are highly involved in their children’s education not only the exact knowledge, values, and experience they would tell their children but also they would pay to their children process to see their children future better.
To begin with, due to the modern technology right now in our society, our parent level of education is different than before. Our parent is highly educated, they acknowledge a lot of knowledge through their education at schools, and they occupy many professional fields such as doctors, engineering, pharmacists, and so on. On top of that, due to fierce competition in their work that makes them learning a lot of experiences and skills. Learning from experience makes the parents acquire a lot of valuable life lessons such as how to be responsible, self-confident, and solve any problem in a very logic way, which can not learn from books. They strive in many fields, they have many knacks to avoid mistakes, they can teach their children all of that, which equips them for better future, avoid mistake, and achieve their goals within a short period of time. However, a parent in the past; they lived in slow pace environment, so their entire dream to see their children supported them in the finance burdens of the family, they do not care about their level of education. For example, my dad is engineering, and he worked in many different companies, he gained a lot of experiences during in his life. I usually when I face a problem in my math course, l usually go to him, and he specifies one hour every day to let me understand math puzzle, On top of that, he gives me a lot of advises, which equips me to reach my distention.
In addition, the acquaintance of knowledge and experience that the children can be gained from their parent, due to fierce competition that our parent sees now in our society, as the result, they want to see their children better than them. In spite the parent right now bear burdens of a lot of responsibilities than before as financial pressure due to increasing the human desire, but regarding their children education, they are more likely to let their children receive a good education even if they will pay more for the schools, they will help them in their projects, and their research to meet the society’s requirement such as anyone has to have a good experience in his field, and a good level of education. Therefore, the parents want to achieve this for their children even they will pay more, The entire dream of the parents to see their children have a better future than them. “Planning for future because that is where you are going to spend the rest of your life “once said, Martin Twain, that reflecting us that the parent should start to plan with their children about their future and give them a lot of advices and let the decision for them.
As all things considered, the parents today are highly involved in the students’ education level to guide them for better future. Our parents today acknowledge many skills and experiences than before due to the development of the technology and the workforce competition.
Essay evaluation report
not only the exact knowledge, values, and experience they would tell their children but also they would pay to their children process to see their children future better.
Description: 'Not only...but also' is not used properly. can you re-write this sentence?
Sentence: For example, my dad is engineering, and he worked in many different companies, he gained a lot of experiences during in his life.
Description: The tag a preposition is not usually followed by in
Suggestion: Refer to during and in
flaws:
No. of Words: 651 350
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 651 350
No. of Characters: 3063 1500
No. of Different Words: 260 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.051 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.705 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.536 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 201 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 141 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 99 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 66 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 36.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.527 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.377 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.538 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.232 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
'The problems that exist in the wor...
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Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to like'
Suggestion: to like
... our level educations, without learning like who has wings, and no feet. The issue w...
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Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
... parent level of education is different than before. Our parent is highly educated, ...
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Line 3, column 847, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... and achieve their goals within a short period of time. However, a parent in the past; they li...
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Line 3, column 1130, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...my dad is engineering, and he worked in many different companies, he gained a lot of experienc...
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Line 3, column 1209, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...ot of experiences during in his life. I usually when I face a problem in my math course, l u...
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Line 5, column 297, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arent right now bear burdens of a lot of responsibilities than before as financia...
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Line 7, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ces and let the decision for them. As all things considered, the parents to...
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'therefore', 'as to', 'for example', 'in addition', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'to begin with', 'on top of that']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237715803453 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.131474103586 0.158761421928 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0677290836653 0.0866891130778 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0491367861886 0.046263068375 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0996015936255 0.0685040099705 145% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.126162018592 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0212483399734 0.0351676179071 60% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78630534769 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0332005312085 0.0309702414327 107% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0796812749004 0.0887237588012 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0132802124834 0.0209618222197 63% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0119521912351 0.0139019557991 86% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3857.0 2387.08602151 162% => OK
No of words: 651.0 408.028673835 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.9247311828 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.05120793913 4.48200974243 113% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.319508448541 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241167434716 0.251872472559 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.176651305684 0.174417080927 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116743471582 0.112833075102 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78630534769 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.42089093702 0.524397521467 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.6716793751 59.2087087015 87% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 36.1666666667 20.5533526081 176% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.6754960936 48.84282405 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 214.277777778 120.699889404 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.1666666667 20.5533526081 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.644075263715 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 60.2834101382 45.7405998639 132% => OK
Elegance: 1.37440758294 1.45489161554 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393588812524 0.300154397459 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.186684442528 0.103427244359 180% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0938255922243 0.0752933317313 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.59975370247 0.497263757937 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.12117424349 0.151897553556 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193973110439 0.114077575197 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997264873023 0.0781384742642 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.497820108413 0.336927656856 148% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0717970596275 0.067059652881 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329978556302 0.210909579961 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835364669011 0.0618886996521 135% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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