TPO 31 less life satisfaction than the past
Since a long time ago, human beings have always been seeking happiness; however, nowadays, different aspects of a person’s life which contribute to the sense of satisfaction have changed drastically. When it comes to this point, some controversy may arise whether people are less gratified with their lives than people in the past. I personally believe so. In what follows, two crucial reasons will be given to shed light on my viewpoint.
The first and paramount reason which comes to my mind is that people dedicate less time to their personal interests. Managing even a simple life has been challenging and demanding thanks to the arrival of job professionalism and economic crises in the modern era. Finding a decent job requires a lot of skill and consequently, a plethora of time will be needed to become an adept. As a result, hardly do people find adequate time to allocate to leisure activities, which in the course of little time, leads to a lack of pleasure. Take a family which has two kids living in Tehran, the capital of Iran, as an example. Both father and mother have to work hard from dawn to dusk in order to fulfil the financial needs of the family. Even the kids have to study hard and attend a significant number of extra-curricular programs to boost their chance of entering a high-ranking university, and seizing future job opportunities. Thus, none of them has enough time to spend on the actual means of happiness. To put it into other words, the more one is ignorant of his/ her interests, the more s/he will feel a lack of satisfaction in life.
Another reason which deserves some word here is that the values of relationships have changed dramatically. In the past, people made relationships based on loyalty, honesty, friendship, etc. On the other hand, in this sophisticated time which we live, even the most important relationships, such as marriages, are based on economic conditions or social classes. Humanity and its values are going to vanish, owing to the fact that people do less care about them. Therefore, people cannot fully trust their partners, wives, husbands, and co-workers, and they live unhappy and stressful lives. According to a recently held study, conducted at Iran’s National Organization of Statistics, of all the couples in Iran, only around a third of them are happy about their matrimony, owing to the wrong ambitions of their marriage.
To put everything in a nutshell, we can conclude that nowadays, people are bereft of senses of gratification and happiness in their lives because not only do they put their interest at the latest priority, but also they make their relationships based on wrong values.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, third, thus, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2238.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98440979955 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88835378484 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570155902004 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 706.5 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5035175896 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.9 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.45 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0985490689074 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279383393553 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426558619028 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619597402377 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549408395704 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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