In the past decade, as time has passed, the education system has been changed. Nowadays, although people have more options available in order to acquire their studies, they would like to get a school education. In this regard, people give a lot of respect to their educators the same as earlier days. On the contrary, some people think that they can learn knowledge without the help of teachers and do not give them much respect. From my vantage point, the former view contains more weight. I take the position on account for the following reasons.
The first reason that makes me hold the belief that the teaching field has been the most respectable all the time because teachers do not provide only theoretical knowledge, but also, make students learn the real-life experience through different stages of their life. Therefore, teachers are always been a role model for many students. To shed more light on this, from a survey of California University, students in current days value the same to their educators compared to the early times. Hence, it is proven that the teaching field and teachers are still valuable for the students.
Another noteworthy point is that despite having many options available for education such as internet education and virtual classes, students always like to attend physical classes in the university. This is because virtual internet courses can not provide those facilities which can be earned through teachers. To be more specific, students are always inspired by their teachers. Additionally, teachers would keep them motivated for their performance in the class. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was in high school, I failed in the science class, However, my science teacher taught me to be persistent towards my goal which helped me to get the first grade in my final exam. Thus, I would have failed my exam if my teacher did not guide me at right time. Therefore, I have learnt the value of a teacher in my life.
All in all, contemplating all remarks, I strongly believe that teachers have always been respected throughout the whole history till the current time. This is because students can acquire precious knowledge from teachers and because the teachers always encourage students to perform well and make them suitable from their career perspective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05440414508 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56971966433 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515544041451 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0107533135 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.55 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0923122643068 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335151450818 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.020596168485 0.0737576698707 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621891320729 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205909887857 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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