In today's societies, the question of whether community nowadays appreciates and cherishes its teachers less than the past time has become a controversial issue among people in many circles and camps. Different people have various types of responses to this topic base on their social, cultural, or even familial backgrounds. However, as far as I'm concerned, I believe that teacher was treasured more in the previous decades for some reason that I elaborate them in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, the first thing comes to mind right off the bat is that teacher were a minority in terms of educated persons. In fact, most of the parents didn't have enough education and tried to do anything for their children to become literate. Accordingly, they honored and praised the teachers and made a good relationship with them. Another hand, nowadays, most of the parents have university degrees and they feel that they don't need the instructor for their children. Let's make a brief explanation about that. According to the statistics that were published by the experts, the number of parents having university degrees has augmented in prior decades. Therefore, any person can obviously notice the decline of teachers' respects.
Another noteworthy aspect that should be mentioned here is that the lifestyle of people has changed significantly during past decades. Children don't respect even to their parents as much as past children did. So, this changing effect the rapport between teachers and student. In addition, a new generation of children is mostly engaged to the internet and social media. As a result, their behavior is affected remarkably with these media. Thus, they don't associate with other people and don't respect them too much. let me shed a light on my point. I remember when I was conducting a survey as a university student on the effect of social media on child reactions, I become surprised when I found out that these media have a lot of negative influence on children. those kids became more alone and less grateful.
In conclusion, there are a plenty of reasons to show that teachers in the past had more value and respect. Not only the number of the educated person was few in those days but also people are more kind to each other. Consequently, it is imperative that any person sees this changes over the time and try to correct it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97481108312 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65029303945 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564231738035 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3804782245 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7727272727 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0454545455 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151386860414 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425054440651 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434224514932 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939839615964 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220500123881 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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