Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all of the day long, I support this point for 2 reasons which I explain following.
Firs, in my opinion, doing similar tasks in one day is so boring. These tasks don’t have any excitement. In order to workers aren’t satisfied and happy when doing similar tasks all of the day long. For example, when a worker comes to his/her work at 8 in the morning, he/she has a lot of energy. he/she is very happy, start his/her job. If he/she does similar tasks during the 2 or 3 hours in a day, his/her mind becomes tired and needs the rest. For long hours in the day when he/she does work in this situation his/, her mind becomes very tired and can’t analyze and process things and different subjects. I think this job become disgusting for a long time. Because the worker must do similar tasks every day. But if he/she do different types of tasks, his/her brain can switch in different kinds of work and become tired very late then do similar tasks. That’s why I said doing the similar task in during a day long is so boring.
Second, the other reason that because I think to do different kinds of work is better for workers is When a worker does different sorts of tasks in a day long, he/she can get a lot of experiences that do similar tasks. In other words, doing different types of tasks increase worker’s ability in different types of tasks. For instance, consider a worker do similar tasks in his/her work, the worker has much ability in this work and have much skill in this, but can’t do other tasks. In contrast, suppose a worker who does many different kinds of tasks in his/her work, he/she can do a lot of different tasks and the domain of his/her ability and skills expand. In addition, in this situation, a worker’s brain become stronger and can deal many different sorts of problems in life. So, doing many different sorts of tasks not only is good for the worker’s job but also is it good for dealing with the problems of his/her life. For this reason, I think doing different kinds of tasks is very helpful for increasing the worker’s ability and skills.
In sum, workers are happier and satisfied, even, more successful in their job when doing different types of tasks that do similar tasks all day long. Because doing similar tasks is so boring and haven’t any excitement in it. Also, when a worker does similar tasks in all day long his/her abilities and skills never progress in other domains of his/her works.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...rkers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...workday than when they do similar tasks all of the day long, I support this point for 2 re...
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Suggestion: all the
...fied and happy when doing similar tasks all of the day long. For example, when a worker co...
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...he morning, he/she has a lot of energy. he/she is very happy, start his/her job. I...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... job become disgusting for a long time. Because the worker must do similar tasks every ...
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Suggestion: does
... similar tasks every day. But if he/she do different types of tasks, his/her brain...
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Suggestion: many
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Suggestion: many
...os;s brain become stronger and can deal many different sorts of problems in life. So, doing ma...
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Suggestion: many
...nt sorts of problems in life. So, doing many different sorts of tasks not only is good for the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in contrast, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2145.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 463.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63282937365 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44135006491 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.360691144708 0.524837075471 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.941710329 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0454545455 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.454323903723 0.236089414692 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.200732649879 0.076458572812 263% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15053017611 0.0737576698707 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.424859712944 0.150856017488 282% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160667355542 0.0645574589148 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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