Today there are many reasons to think in events that are happening in the world and how could affect our daily life. Most countries suffer some disadvantages because they often depend on others whose are producing whether positive or negative effects. Now we can state mention few important reasons associated with these impacts.
Firstly, we have globalization. This term is associated with changes that are happening in some countries with the purpose to gain power and domain, creating certain issues in the economy in other countries. As an example, we can mention technology. By the time diverse countries in our world are increasing their needs to obtain new resources and technology as a competition, they spend a lot of money and resources in order to obtain the last benefits in communications. We can find new mobile devices, computers systems, and even computers which are embedded in cars, smart tv, mobile radios, etc.
Secondly, we can mention the term fight for the oil. This is another situation could affect many countries because of the need of this natural resource, the oil, which is considered one of the most important engines in the international economy. Many countries are expecting the opportunity to invade other nations in order to obtain this natural resource and therefore increase their economy and power. In addition to this, there are many conflicts even wars as a consequence of gaining the natural resource. According to this situations, the economy in almost every nation always depends on this criteria and brings issues which affect salaries and marketing.
In conclusion, we can imagine every time we watch the TV or read the newspaper, those international events could not affect my daily life. However, if we follow the consequences could bring to our economy and peaceful, there are many reasons to think those things really affect us in some way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15210355987 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73149894726 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527508090615 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6646376428 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.133333333 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119629569226 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430854427576 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486320249925 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864831564895 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437772637951 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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