TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

To do any task, there has to be a proper planning and organization skills. If a person keep on doing things impromptu, there won't be the scope of getting better results. Yes, the modern life is complex so, every young people have to have the ability to plan and organize. There are several merits of planning and organising habits. It will be time and energy saving. In addition to this, it will make an individual more motivated and concentrated to what they are doing. In the same way, it will increase sense of responsibility and independence in anything they attempt to do.

First, the young people are always in rush. They never respect the value of time. When they do anything without any plan and preparation, with hast, it will lead to more time and energy consumption. We will be exhausted with random flow of task. There is more possibility of falling back. Once we started doing something, we will keep on repeating the same mistake number of times and have to begin everything from the very beginning. So, there are chances of irritability in the individual. Thus, there has to be an ability to plan and organise things properly. For an instance, if one plans what has to be done in limited period of time, there will be better performance. Young people want things to be done on time, so once they understand the skills, it will lead them to the right path.

Second, when one starts planning, they will spend more time how to accomplish a task. This will help them to be more motivated and concentrated to the task they are performing. Similarly, they are dogged and will be able to reach their goal. For an instance, if one keeps on thinking what can be better, and keeps on planning how it will done, then there won't be failure instead there will be increased chances in success. In the same way, the youths will be more focused towards their goal of life.

Third, with the increase in the availability of the facilities, the modern life has been so sluggish. Mainly the young people are habituated of doing things in random and get depressed with the failure they get when they perform any task. In order to be more active, independent and self reliant, they have to learn to plan what next in their lives. Life is not easy. The time won't stay still. So, they have to start planning and organising every single event in their life. Similarly, this will help them become happier in lives.

In conclusion, in this modern world, the young generation must understand the value of planning and organising skills. With the advent of science and technology, everything is available in the tip of the finger. So, it will be better if they started becoming more planned and organised in order to use the facilities wisely. Being complacent will never help anyone to grow. Therefore, to have a better future, planning and organising skills are the most.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 625, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ne plans what has to be done in limited period of time, there will be better performance. Youn...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'do' or 'be done'?
Suggestion: do; be done
...tter, and keeps on planning how it will done, then there wont be failure instead the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, similarly, so, still, then, therefore, third, thus, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in the same way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2368.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 504.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69841269841 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52605470664 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.414682539683 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 742.5 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1947347487 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6470588235 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8235294118 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55882352941 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182981103971 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593828501972 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669227807963 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135449288947 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632970765883 0.0645574589148 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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