In the last decade, people have started taking education very seriously. Many of them choose different subjects so that they can learn various contents related to many subjects before their graduation. But I would say, each person has different definitions of getting success in their life. Some people think that it is required to have various skillsets to acquire success. While others hold a different opinion that success comes only when people focus on one skill. From my perspective, the latter view carries more weight. I take the position on account for the following reasons.
Primarily, focusing on one skill helps a person to gain immense knowledge of the particular field. Additionally, People would definitely get good work experience sticking in a single specialty. Therefore, a person with a deep knowledge of a single subject and having a lot of working experience in the same field can be able to work efficiently and effectively. On the contrary, people who would try to gain knowledge for different majors might not have a single and steady job because they would waste their time trying to be experts in every field, and may not prove themself to work in one workplace. My cousin is a compelling example of this situation. When he was in university, he took pharmacy as his major subject. He worked as a pharmacist for a few years, however, later on, he started pursuing dentistry since he did not like working as a pharmacist anymore. As a result, he wasted his five precious years in order to complete dentistry and could not make a strong resume in one major field. Therefore, he had a hard time finding a good job when his friends were almost settled down in one field at the same time. Now, he realized that had he not changed his major earlier, he would be working as a pharmacist in a good position.
Another subtle point I want to deem here is that no one can deny the fact that staying determined in one subject would help to have a good command for that subject. People will be masters after working in a single field for longer years. Needless to say, they will make negligible mistakes since they have gone through various phases where they made many mistakes and learned from their own mistakes. This is why people who have survived from long years working in a one-field get promoted easily. To elaborate this more, my own life is very much related to this topic. I have been working as a software developer for ten years. I started my job as a junior developer from the same company, and I got promoted many times as I gained experience gradually. Now, my company promoted me as a manager because I am the only person who has a long-time work experience as a developer in my company. Hence, having long years of working experience in my field not only helped me to get promoted to a higher post but also, people started giving me a lot of respect at my workplace.
Lastly, having discussed the issue from this point of view, I rather look into it from another standpoint. Admittedly, if a person wants to be proficient, he must allocate a lot of his time educating himself for that subject. Nevertheless, it does not mean that the person does not learn new ideas and broaden his horizon in different fields. Researchers from UCLA university found that for being successful in life, people need to spend 70% of their total time on their specialized field, but the rest must be devoted to the related subjects.
All in all, I strongly believe that it is necessary to be focused in one field to get success in life. This is because people would get more job opportunities, and because it helps people to reach their goals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e various skillsets to acquire success. While others hold a different opinion that su...
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...g me a lot of respect at my workplace. Lastly, having discussed the issue from ...
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... it helps people to reach their goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, lastly, look, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3021.0 1977.66487455 153% => OK
No of words: 644.0 407.700716846 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69099378882 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0375743251 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59973459056 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 289.0 212.727598566 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448757763975 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 953.1 618.680645161 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0520710176 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.40625 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188704251989 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566808227301 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589118078649 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127426769059 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699695134813 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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