We are now living in a time, where the world is much faster than previous and people tend to enthusiastically advocate the importance of multitasking, It is generally appreciated having the capability of performing disparate types of tasks in parallel. However, I personally think that, it might not be always beneficial to do different things if someone is not able to concentrate fully on all of his tasks. Therefore, I agree with the statement above and the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most compelling reasons.
First of all, taking responsibility for too many tasks at the same time creates tremendous pressure on health and mind. Consequently, it would be hard to complete all of the tasks in hand efficiently. For instance, as a software engineer, I have to perform multiple kinds of jobs at the same time, like implement new features, support release and fix issues, make documents, prepare training materials and attend in regular meetings. Sometimes I feel that it is very difficult to manage all of these tasks and even in my free time, I have to think about all the pending tasks. Thus, not only it affects my efficiency but also it has a detrimental effect on my physical and mental health.
Furthermore, the most common problem of people is the inability to assign priority to each task. It is crucial to prepare tasks that need to be performed and consider the priority of each item. To make a schedule of each task helps one to complete his work with more efficacy. For example, who is planning to go abroad for higher study needs to perform many tasks within a very short time. He has to prepare for GRE or TOEFL, study research papers, search for university which provides degree on his domain, prepare a resume and other docs, manage money to apply, etc, If he tries to do all of those things at the same time, it might result in lower performance in each category. He could get a lower score in TOEFL as he was too busy in online courses to prepare his study material. Hence, it is required to set priority and complete those tasks one after another.
Finally, rather than doing many things at a time, people should have made long term plan. It is not easy to take so many tasks at a time and finish them at once. If someone wants to look at himself as an expert in some field, he should take a long term plan and continue learning different topics in that field. Thus, after a few years, he can show that he has a portfolio that would be highly appreciated by experts in this field. On the other hand, some people might want to take 3-4 months planning to learn everything at a time, which would not be effective and consequently he can not achieve his goal.
In conclusion, contemplating all the above reasons, I agree with the statement that, doing so many things at a time degrades the quality of work and it should be avoided for a better future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...sequently, it would be hard to complete all of the tasks in hand efficiently. For instance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2393.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 517.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62862669246 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63597974133 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504835589942 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 763.2 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8481654426 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.952380952 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.619047619 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148817685601 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479324650886 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055657451352 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107673860068 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663770155775 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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